Kriffing amazing fan fiction. Short (kinda) but well structured and ended appropriately. I very much enjoyed reading this.

Oh! this is a really original and good story. I have enjoyed so much that it's coming into my favorite list. Afterwards I'm going to be looking for a sequel. I hope that you wrote one but if not it does not matter this story is still very good and I enjoyed every single chapter of it. Thanks :-)

Interesting out take on this. Most of the time authors have Vator coming back to the light. Not that I dont like those, but I think this made a great plot.

PS those were the longest two chapters I have ever read

As much as I enjoyed the original Star Wars movies, I rarely read anything with Star Wars characters in it. For some reason when I saw this on a favs list, I just had to go see.

Great What if, wonderfully put together.

And now I'm going to put a Star Wars fic on my favs list. Uh. There are pigs getting reading to ice skate in a fire pit right about now.

great

The effect a father can have on his son...

This was very good, although you never went into what happened to Padme other than Kenobi took her somewhere, but I liked this a lot. Not as much as 'Dynasty' though, but I liked it. This Vader was closer to the canon than Dynasty's but I liked Dynasty's better. Though he was cruel and ruthless there, he was also fun and human which I thought was a fun combination. Here, I liked seeing the change in Luke, but I think the bond between the two could be improved in terms of the affection between them, but I loved the story anyway.

That was an extremely well done Darkside Luke, the only thing I would want is more of the story. I hope you plan on continuing with a sequel, but even if you don't, that was a fantastic read.

Hi!

This story is great! I really like how Luke is turning to the dark side, and Yan Solo is fun at the end.

Thanks a lot!

Sara

So awesome! I can't believed I missed this! Thanks for sharing!

WIN. Epic Win. I love you. I love you lots. Marry me? Yes you will. TO VEGAS WE GO.

I have to say, I have really mixed feelings about this fic.

It WAS well-written, and quite easy to follow. But I feel as though Vader had his cake and got to eat it too.

The Dark Side corrupts wholly and it's likely that 'Prince Vader' will one day cut down his own father. I imagine his reasoning will be the same as it was in this fic: he can do a better job than Darth Vader.

This is the problem with Luke turning to the Dark Side; he is not the Chosen One, he cannot toe the line and leave relatively unscathed like Anakin can.

This fic was macabre and disheartening. I know that good doesn't always win, but to see someone innocent be corrupted so easily?

This seems to be yet another fic where Luke is a fool with no backbone, no sense of self, and absolutely no common sense. Anyone with eyes can see that what the Empire was doing was wrong, but not Luke Skywalker. As far as I'm concerned, this version of Luke was a disappointment. I understand wanting to be with family, but God! Luke didn't question Vader at ALL. Vader was lucky to have this guy as a son because it was like he was born to be his father's lackey.

This fic DOES get points for presenting a different premise, so I guess I have to give you kudos for that, and even if it did leave an unfinished air, if asked, I would not discourage the read.

Hi,

I have to say that you have very long chaps. Nothing against it. It was great. Very great. But I thought 2 chaps. After them I go to sleep and I read and read and overslept today. :)

but I like the transformation from the naive farmboy to prince Vader.

Thanks for writing and I will add it to my Favorites to reread it, when I have the time.

Bye your stupid thing

Wow I think this is one of the oldest stories I've yet found on this site to date and although it is rather short it is so masterfully written that it tells a better story than hundreds of others that span dozens of chapters and hundreds of thousands of words sometimes. One other thing I've got to compliment you on is the fact that if you hadn't of told me that you had a co-author (and I assume that she did some of the writing here) I wouldn't have even suspected it, your styles mesh together very well. Most other authors write in such distinct, and oftentimes polarly opposite, ways it's easy to tell where one left off and another began. I sincerely hope you have more stories following this particular line of thought cause I'd like to see what kind of fallout there could be to this.

I'm really liked the story. Well done to both authors.

I like how they strive to make the Empire better but still with the Dark side.

First story I read with an idea like this.

This story is overall very good. I especially liked the beginning when Luke joins the Empire in order to become a pilot. There aren't many fics when Luke does this. But the things with Vader were strange and I didn't like. If you would've continued with the idea "Luke as an Empire pilot" you would've my full support. Anyway, I want to ask you if you plan to write another "Luke is an Empire pilot" fic.