 The Blearing Phoenix 2009-03-02 . chapter 1I got this sense of playfulness and haughtiness while reading this piece from you. You've kept Raphael, Cassandra, and Amy perfectly in character and nowadays that seems to be sorely lacking in SC fics, so I must commend you for that. Very nicely written, there aren't any errors of any manner, and I simply adore this. Well done.
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 Curse Pen 2009-01-19 . chapter 1I have to say bravo. And if I knew any other languages, I would say it everyway I knew how. However, I am very much monolingistic.
It is hard to find a Raph/Cass story that is not about his breaking her, or her failed redemption of him. Your take on them, no matter how short, is great. For some reason, shorter stroies are harder to write but more fun to read.
Loved your ending. You captured presicely the tone I always associated with Raphael.
Great job, hope to read more of your stuff in the future. |
 Whispyr 2009-01-14 . chapter 1This is really nice. ^^
It's short but yet, worth a lot of gold! :D |
 Sion0083 2009-01-04 . chapter 1Very nice indeed. And although I much more enjoy your smuttier fics (I know, I know. Shallow) I just about love everything else you put out between Cass/Raph anyway, so this is hardly a stain on the record. I really do adore the way you portray Raphael and Cassandra. It would be interesting to see them in a more modern setting. Amusing actually! I would totally love to see that! Man...if only I could write half this good I'd be so on it. Sigh. But no way am I going to soil the pairing's good name by attempting to do so, even though I've already considered it. Ah...but I'm rambling again.
Ta ta for now! |
 TechNomaNcer28 2009-01-03 . chapter 1This was totally a different type of story of yours.I mean it doesnt have much dark element but is still so very good.Your writing style will be my death. It's simply amazing and super pretty. |
 occasionallyme 2009-01-02 . chapter 1You know I'm in love with your writing, right?
'he’s unfailingly superior, always, but in this one thing…she can’t rise to his level, so he comes, willingly, to hers.' - *swoons*
glad to see you back. happy 2009. :D |
 terabient 2009-01-02 . chapter 1so. normally a fic that promises pairing fluff is something i avoid like the plague.
BUT
this was an absolute treat to read. your writing has an easy, lyrical flow that is descriptive without becoming all purple (something that seems to be an issue in this fandom, at least as represented by the first page.)
thank you for writing this. |
 Razer Athane 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Milate Ellinika!
Yeah. I know. Shut up Razer, just because you're Greek doesn't mean you get to flaunt it everywhere, but DAMN that comment about Raphael speaking in Greek was so... fangirly in a 'wavy arms' type manner.
All in all, very fluffy and cutesy :D You're getting better and better :D |
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