cute ^_^

*explodes*
I thought I reviewed this earlier.. obviously not *feels awful*
Anyhoo, I LURVE JO! So angsty, not to mention a fabulous threesome >:3 and yes, I was hit with another idea as I read this... you strike again :3

"..." (*speechless*)

As usual when I don't find the right words, I'll use a songtext quote:

"Oh how the world seems so unfair
Creating a love that cannot be shared"

It's so sad! And to say it once more: your writing style is simply amazing. It really touched my heart...

((Another reason might be that I was forced (basically at gunpoint) by one of my avid readers to hurry up and finish the next chapter of "Final Fiction"; and that chapter contains a scene that will (in the long run) lead up to this whole mess... ))

wow... this is a beautiful piece, i love all the emotion!