:)

Oi. Now I see why they're called 'fanon' characters. ;) Jaer and Jaerin are fantastic examples of good OC's. I like them tremendously. Jaerin reminds me way too much of Corin, but that's a good thing. ;)

Oi. I'm still snickering too hard to write a good review. I'll just leave it at 'great job, you had me hooked by the first chapter' and add it to my favs. ;)

May the Lion be with you,

KC

Aww.

Oh well it was fun while it lasted!

Thank you for this hilarious story
“Wolfsbane, How, Peridanson! What is the meaning of this?”
- I'm still laughing about that
But my favourite was the invention of “The Lion’s Might” - just beautiful in it's complexity ;-)

Oh, and the roots for "The Lion's Might" - that's both brillant and hilarious! I love it! You must have had so much fun writing this. :P

Whoo-hoo! Oh my platypus! You had me laughing so hard, I actually have tears running down my face! That is just...hilarious! Oy vay...oy vay...oy vay! Hysterical! HA! Hehehehe...

Brillant! I loved it, obviously. The way you write Jaer and Jaerin and incorperate them into the Narnian canon is genius! Love 'em. Love 'em, love 'em. And that's all there is to say. :P

Cozy slippers!
Starsy Skye

I was laughing so hard reading this that I forgot to review for each chapter. Why are you not on my Fav. Author list? Hm I thought you were. Well this is such a priceless piece of work and I had a good laugh reading it. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more from you.

Rolletti

Sorry for not reviewing more, but life has got so busy lately!
This chapter is full of brilliant moments, like Jaerin's prank on Jaer (not playing a prank, great and witty idea. Then the last two sentences of the chapter are fantastic; it is a very intelligent way of ending the story, leaving it open ended, so we can put our imaginations to work. Excellent!
But this moment, this moment
“Did you do that, Jaerin?” Edmund asked.
Jaerin shook his head, awe stamped on his face. “No. But I wish I had.” He looked again at the rather angry faces of the swordmasters. “Then again, maybe it’s a good thing I didn’t.”

It's priceless! The very image of the great swordmasters slipping the ice is so so funny that I kept laughing for a good while.
Thank you for such a funny story. It's not usual to see the kings acting as children and that was a light and entertaining parenthesis. Jaer and Jaerin are a good influence, really!
Happy New Year to you too. Waiting anxiously for your next chapter of 'Only Children'

Tair

I love this story! It was hilarious... Boys will be boys. I especially loved the clever way you began the story. I didn't even realize it was a prank until chapter 3. Great job!

Oh LOL, we need a sequel.

Meh! *dies laughing*

Jaerin you are my hero. And poor Jaer. . .my god the pranking will never stop with Jaerin's clothes gone now will they. *snickers* I love that their four person move was begun here. It made me go AW because I think that move is amazingly amazing. Which. . .did not make sense at all. But anyway!

Yay Jaer and Jaerin. I'm very proud of them and I huggle them to death.
Till the next update/story.

Kay

Strange, I thought I had set this to alert. . . *shakes head* okay so!

I LOVE THESE TWO! It's just the kind of prank I would have pulled and Jaerin's cheek is /adorable/. Our poor Kings. . .

Well this is short. I have 3 more chapters to read. Till then!

Kay

Whoops. I just re-read my review and realized that what I said came across rather strangely. I meant to say that I am eagerly awaiting more stories from you, not more chapters on this story.

Just clarifying. :)

Keep writing!

FyreFlyte

Can I just say that I am VERY glad you decided to make the story longer? It is so enjoyable...just what we all need around here. :) Also, you are doing a wonderful job of updating quickly...it takes a lot of dedication and I salute you for it.

Ice. Centaurs. Oh boy...I can completely sympathize with the Swordmasters. There's a lot of ice where I am, too...only it's quite a bit funnier to "see" Oreius slip than it is to see me slip! :)

And what is happening to Jaerin, now? His clothes are missing? My, my, that is a TAD bit important...I wonder who's behind all that. :)

Eagerly awaiting more,
FyreFlyte :)

You have to love a Narnian prank war!! Very good story, I was laughing all the way through!

So you're *done*?! I suppose that's okay, because we aren't all thinking that Peter and Edmund are going to be murdered at mignight...Good job!
Lu