Yeah, yeah, so you wrote this forever ago, I know. But I might as well review it, eh? So I really like your extra characters. They are funny! And this story actually had me laughing. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I like the thing about Jaerin's clothes disappearing. But please say he had /something/ left. Anyway, I really, really liked this story, especially the way you set it up with the first chapter, which unnerved me. Then I realized what was going on and couldn't stop laughing!

That's great! I love Jaer and Jaerin with Peter and Edmund.

"It is good to see them play."

Exactly. :)

I loved this story! I think that the characters of Jaer and Jaerin are brilliant.

Nice ending... ;)

very cute story!

:)

Oi. Now I see why they're called 'fanon' characters. ;) Jaer and Jaerin are fantastic examples of good OC's. I like them tremendously. Jaerin reminds me way too much of Corin, but that's a good thing. ;)

Oi. I'm still snickering too hard to write a good review. I'll just leave it at 'great job, you had me hooked by the first chapter' and add it to my favs. ;)

May the Lion be with you,

KC

Aww.

Oh well it was fun while it lasted!

Thank you for this hilarious story

“Wolfsbane, How, Peridanson! What is the meaning of this?”

- I'm still laughing about that

But my favourite was the invention of “The Lion’s Might” - just beautiful in it's complexity ;-)

Oh, and the roots for "The Lion's Might" - that's both brillant and hilarious! I love it! You must have had so much fun writing this. :P

Whoo-hoo! Oh my platypus! You had me laughing so hard, I actually have tears running down my face! That is just...hilarious! Oy vay...oy vay...oy vay! Hysterical! HA! Hehehehe...

Brillant! I loved it, obviously. The way you write Jaer and Jaerin and incorperate them into the Narnian canon is genius! Love 'em. Love 'em, love 'em. And that's all there is to say. :P

Cozy slippers!

Starsy Skye

I was laughing so hard reading this that I forgot to review for each chapter. Why are you not on my Fav. Author list? Hm I thought you were. Well this is such a priceless piece of work and I had a good laugh reading it. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more from you.

Rolletti

Sorry for not reviewing more, but life has got so busy lately!

This chapter is full of brilliant moments, like Jaerin's prank on Jaer (not playing a prank, great and witty idea. Then the last two sentences of the chapter are fantastic; it is a very intelligent way of ending the story, leaving it open ended, so we can put our imaginations to work. Excellent!

But this moment, this moment

“Did you do that, Jaerin?” Edmund asked.

Jaerin shook his head, awe stamped on his face. “No. But I wish I had.” He looked again at the rather angry faces of the swordmasters. “Then again, maybe it’s a good thing I didn’t.”

It's priceless! The very image of the great swordmasters slipping the ice is so so funny that I kept laughing for a good while.

Thank you for such a funny story. It's not usual to see the kings acting as children and that was a light and entertaining parenthesis. Jaer and Jaerin are a good influence, really!

Happy New Year to you too. Waiting anxiously for your next chapter of 'Only Children'

Tair

I love this story! It was hilarious... Boys will be boys. I especially loved the clever way you began the story. I didn't even realize it was a prank until chapter 3. Great job!

Oh LOL, we need a sequel.