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nik
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
Very good story
Clover64
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
That was great! Very, very sad, but great! Katrina's lines were so poignant, especially the bit about seeing a soldier and thinking about all the ones that didn't come back. And I particularly loved these lines:

“I hope you never forget me, Kavar. I hope you never forget tonight.”
“I wouldn’t dream of it.”
Katrina scowled. “You’ll wish you could.”

Ouch! But fantastic. XD Good oneshot!
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