Wow... Just... Wow...

This is incredibly imaginative, and very well written. I saw the first review, and I think that said reviewer is completely mistaken.

Start over? To hell with that!

You transferred the idea of Part 1, moved it to a more recent time, and did it very well. I also see that you gave The World to Jonathan , and made a completely new Stand for Dio. System of a Down... very creative. I have not seen very much JJBA fanfiction, and am very pleased to see that the series is getting the appropriate facetime. This story is going straight to my favorites, and I await the next chapter with bated breath. If you want any suggestions for Stands later on, please let me know. I'm sure I could help you.

Sincerely,
Twilteyes93 :)

Uhg. So little JJBA fiction, but this story makes me facepalm, hard, over and over. I just don't know where to begin.

MUSE is probably one of the lamest original villains I've ever read about. You've lameified Dio, your descriptions are all over the place, and you misuse words like you're being paid. Also, you name stands after awful, terrible, awful bands like Evanescence and System of a Down.

I really hate to sound harsh, but in the spirit of I'll give constructive criticism; consider starting over. Don't try so hard to use fancy language when you're not really solid on the usage of all these words. Stick to OCs if you're not going to even try to keep the canons that you're using, AU or not, in character.

On the bright side, you have good taste in manga. JJBA is a great series. Anyways, keep trying.