like like ;)

wow! *CHEERS! CONFETTI!* Wonderful. I feel so much better. I did love this...every part of this. EVEN when you (Ok, edward) broke my (ok, Bella's) heart. loved loved loved! can't wait to move on to The Dom & The Training. whoot!

OH THANK GOD. chapter 31 nearly killed me. I may have lost a couple of friends ... i may have ranted about not warning me of the coming angst (that's clearly marked in the story's category).

Thankfully, the love birds have reunited and i can go about mending fences.

Love this...so much!

Oh Sweet Lord.

*gasping*

that was the most perfect chapters in the history of perfect chapters.

I may never recover.

thanks for sharing :)

I just started reading today. I've wanted to write reviews for each chapter. All that comes to mind are outcries and gasps. I can see why EVERYONE in the fandom refers to The Submissive as classic, MUST READ fanfic. WOW!

LOVED IT! YOU ROCK!

:'-D -yes, happy tears

Ugh. Anal. Ew. Yeah, I'm so not a prude, but one bad experience in that area lasts a lifetime.

Master...that word has never seemed sexy to me before...

I don't have words...wow comes to mind, but...yeah, wow

Wow. That was . . . sudden! It's funny, though. I have such a hard time with Bella going down on Edward. I know this isn't cannon, but I can't get past the fact that I can NEVER see canon Edward letting Bella be down on her knees in front of him. I feel he would have seen it as demeaning to her. And, yet, I have no idea why I feel this way.

Anyway, HOT! Hello! lol

Loving it!

I'm reading this cuz Roselover2 and LolaShoes told me to. I loved MoTU and they tell me that your story came first, so I was interested.

So far, so good!

The Fictionators - http:/www(dot)fictionators(dot)com/ has featured your story on our site for the week of 5/11/2012.

Thanks, we really appreciate your contribution to the fandom :)

Songster for The Fictionators