 AnimeAngelRin 2009-01-05 . chapter 1I like the way you write, but I had just a few things to comment on. I could be wrong, but I think the timeline may be off by just a tad. about one year after they became partners, they were somewhere in volume 4, and I believe it was another year before Kyoto. my only other comment: isn't several hundred yards way too far for Tsuzuki to see Hisoka? XD for anyone to see anyone, for that matter? lol that's all I wanted to say =P I hope you write more TsuSoka!!
~Rin |