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Yay! More Vilgax, and being sneaky to boot! A lovely chapter, I loved it, really. I also enjoyed the little bits of inter-dimensional trivia.

Sa!

A lovely up-date! Short, but most deffinitely worth reading, for it was quite interesting!

very interesting, but i have a question:

can Gwen show some powers soon, i love seeing, or in this case reading, her kick butt

and Catch 22? isn't that the one otherwise known as caught between a rock and a hard place?

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Okay, so I'm usually not a big fan of OC fics, but this one has piqued my interest. I look forward to your next up-date. However, small question: You're not actually going to KILL Vilgax, are you? I certainly hope not, since he and Gwen are kinda needed, and I always entertained the thought of him becoming... well, not good, but not exactly evil.

Pretty cool can you have this Rafknack, send someone to test to see if what he detected was true, send the bounty hunter (who looks like a Piranha/ivy creature) that uses its Vines to trap its victims

its one weakness is that it get dehydrated easily.

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Pretty interesting chap!

I suggest going for the left, and as for a ideda, how about a bunch of pirates detecting Vilgax surge through Dimension came for the Dimnitrixs, with the head pirate looking like a Spider humanoid that can spit Webs out of its mouth and is pretty strong.

ohh! yayayayayay! thank you for updating and mentioning me! i love vilgax so much! e! please keep writing this, and do you like the story peter pan? (specifically, do you like captain hook? ^-^) if you do, could you read the fanfictions i have up for it? i need more reviews to get some input. don't read Jaclyn Cross on the Jolly Roger, though. i'm re-vamping it at the moment, so it'l be coming down soon... :( but it'll go right back up! :) instead, read my other one, A Deal With the Devil. thank you lots! update soon!

this. is. so. awesome! i love ben ten, but i hate it at the same time because there's so much more you could do with the watch if you were responsible and used it correctly. i think you should still have her goof off with it occaisionally i mean, she is still a college student;), but i like how you've portrayed her. she kind of accepted the watch a little too easily, though. wouldn't she at least have been a little wierded out by the fact that the watch couldn't come off? or that it could talk? i don't know. i'm just babbling. but this is a great plot so far, and i can't wait for vilgax to show up! *squeals* he's so cool!