Is this suppose to be first or third person writing. In some places it looks like first, but in most it looks like third. Considering you have BPOV at the top I thought it would be first throughout. I believe this will be a good story, if I can get past the changes from first to third to first person.

**Clapping, madly**

WooHoot, what a story full of...'HURT' but also full of wonderful twists and turns.

Thank you for sharing your talent of storytelling. I enjoyed the journey.

Take Care and Happy Writing
Rita ;D

It was so good to hear Carlisle POV, especially when he was scolding his SON for his spectacular stupidity.

My fav Carlisle line...

"That necklace saved your life, Edward. As well as Bella's blood. In ancient days, when someone saved your life, you belonged to them."

OMG! You chose to stop...there? Arghhhhh!

Ewwww...That James is so evil. Yuk!

Wow...what a backstory.

Change...it's what I love about FanFic...It gives our beloved Twi-Characters more life and more interest to us. Thank you for being so creative. Love the parallel to Twilight, but you've added new twists...here and there...it doesn't 'HURT' me one bit. Well done!

Oooo...I so like how your mind...works ;P That chappie brought my blood pressure...UP, for sure! Nice to know that I am alive ;}

OOooo...labrat Edward...geeky, totally.

I think we all enjoy the molestation of Cullen by kinky Bella! ;}

WooHoot!

I certainly loved the incentive for Bella to walk to Therapy Guy.

Case...C.L.O.S.E.D.

Oh, Thank Fuck...they kissed and kissed and kissed and finally made up. I certainly didn't get tired of them sucking each others face. It was about friggin' time!

Ow**As I rub my chest**

That chappie was a heart killer.

That wobble was hella sexy!

It should be dub ...'The Swan Room'

The tenderness shared between DM & GC...has made my heart, sing!