LOVED IT YOU SHOULD HAVE KEPT ON GOING I WAS GETTING INTO IT!

great great story

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I don't like Pan with Trunks but other than that I guess good. Pan is way younger than Trunks. I don't think they should be together but your fic. Good job I guess. Kinda good other than the pairing.

Hey!

I want to thank you for reviewing my story 'Fallen' and I'm very very glad you like it! So I've begun with reading your stories, and up to this point you haven't let me down. I like the ones I've read so far very much, it's very original. Well, I've got to go; I've got more of your stories to read!

Hey...where do you get your ideas from?

ALL your stories are sooooooooooooooooooooo Kawaii!

Especially this one! Im looking forward to your next stories*lol*

Bye, Faith

that is such a good story keep writing and make longer chapters and update fast thats the best way to write a story if its good which your is

you have to finish this is sooo goood! more plz!

That was a nice Fanfic. T like romantic fics and well this one is definately in the top 5. Keep writing, your good, I really enjoyed. Cant wait to read your next one

kawaii,kawaii,kawaii,write more please

I LOVE your story idea. One tiny little thing you might have gotten mixed up Pan has black hair. I hope that you keep writing your story I can't wait to read the next chapter!

O.o;; That was crazy!

Waaii! That was sooo sweet! I luv it!

Pretty cool and original. T/P rule!

Origional .