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Twilight44
2009-11-21 . chapter 32
I MUST SAY THAT IN THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS I AM REALLY STARTING TO HATE ALICE. SHE JUST DOESNT ACT LIKE A FRIEND I'D WANT. SHE IS CONIVING AND BLAMES EDWARD FOR HER OWN UNHAPPINESS. SHE NEEDS TO TAKE CONTROL OF HER OWN LIFE - NOT HIS. SHE IS RESPONSIBLE FOR HER OWWN HAPPINESS - NOT HIM. I DONT THINK SHE REALIZES HOW MUCH PRESSURE SHE PUTS ON HIM. IF I WAS BELLA THE WAY ALICE HAS BEEN ACTING - I WOULD BE SERIOUSLY **.

THANK YOU FOR KEEPING EDWARD TRUE TO HIS FEELINGS FOR BELLA AND NOT SACRIFICING HIMSELF FOR ALICE - AGAIN. I DONT LIKE ALICE YANKING EDWARD AWAY FROM THE LIFE HE LONGS FOR.

LET HER FIXATE ON EMMETT NOW.
Fates-Love-Queen
2009-11-21 . chapter 37
Oh my gosh... what's up with Rose and Jake?
I thought everything was perfect : (
Oh No, she didn't have a miscarriage, did she...?

Aww, Emmett and Colleen, YAY!

Jasper and Angela? No! Jasper and Alice! hehe.

So happy that Bella and Edward are still overwhelmingly happy!

Can't wait for the sequel hun! <3
lovemesometwi
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
what is gonna happen at the cabin?
braziliangirl2
2009-11-20 . chapter 37
Angela,
I couldn't find the picture of Edward and Bella's giminy rings. Do you still have it? I saw it once and want to see it again. So beautiful!
Your story is great, by the way. Congrets!
babbles
2009-11-20 . chapter 37
I finally got around to this chapter, I think I was partially putting it off because I am sad for it to end, I am so excited for the sequel though...

thank you for giving Edward and Bella the life that you did, because you story is so unpredictable I always feared they wouldn't end this way, You did them justice...

I think I missed something with Rosalie, or was it meant to be cryptic, Miscarriage maybe? Um general depression? IDK...

Emmett=)
Alice ?, I have always struggled with this Alice, I am anxious to see where you take her character...
Jasper just sorda flows with whatever...

I can't wait to see what you do next... Thanks again!
Twilight44
2009-11-20 . chapter 31
So good
KBelikov
2009-11-20 . chapter 37
I truly love your story. It's the best one I've ever read!! I am so excited for the sequel that I keep reading you story over and over!! The emotion you put in the story and the twist makes it the best story i've read- hands down. Keep on writing... You inspire me every day that love is out there :-) in fact, I really really want you to make a sequel to the sequel even though the sequel hasn't come out yet.. I know it sounds crazy. Your story has truly touched me. Like I said, keep on writing, because I love reading about these characters! You even make them better than stephanie meyers! ( no offense)... Anyway, fabulous writing and I can't wait for the sequel!
justginger
2009-11-19 . chapter 37
I loved your story and can't wait for the next saga!xoxo
Twilight44
2009-11-19 . chapter 30
I love the way you keep throwing in whammys
Twilight44
2009-11-19 . chapter 29
That person clearly had no life. If they want to quit reading -- quit! Dont take their ** out on someone clearly working as hard as you are for this fantastic story!
Demons4eva
2009-11-19 . chapter 30
Loving the story, I can understand how some may feel that there is no hope for these 2. I get it, I actually tried to do myself in with a bottle of booze and some pills, I had just broken up with my fiance who is now my husband just over 20 years ago. ** happens to people when you are in love and stuff just gets ** up.
We obviously re-united after a while and now have 2 teenage kids and are madly in love. I have done ** I am not overly pleased with myself for, but you can't beat yourself up over it. Age and time are wonderful healers.

I feel I need to nominate you and your story for the fanastic new site A Different Forest, its a site I have fallen for and I regually go there to join in some terrific twific news and stories.
I recommend everyone check it out!
Twilight44
2009-11-18 . chapter 28
WOW! NUFF SAID!
b3j02
2009-11-17 . chapter 27
Your vows and wedding were so beautiful. I think everything was perfect. I loved all of the different interactions and all of the things that went into it. Too bad Bella will cave. I never did and it's been 10 years. I will review more later am just ready to read more...
kmscds27
2009-11-17 . chapter 29
I just wanted to tell you I think your story is amazing.I think you have talent and have created a story that makes people feel wrapped up in the story and root for the characters.I have had the problem of pulling myself away to get my house cleaned amd dinner made :) I say ignore people who try to put you down or make you feel bad about updating sooner. most people have lives and most readers on FF realize this and appreciate the time and effort you put in to getting this story out to us. So thank you!
Twilight44
2009-11-17 . chapter 27
yes yes yes write a sequel and outtakes!
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