This is like The Big Chill or something so many characters, so much going on, angst...drama...a great read!

Wow! This is so crazy good. I am really enjoying all the different POV's. I was trepidatious thinking I would be too confused, but they are very clearly written and easy to follow. I am neither a fan of Jake or Rosalie in general, but that extraordinarily hot scene with them on the couch in Jake's POV was just about the hottest non-intercourse scene I have read. A lot of confusion, heartbreak and intense emotions flying around for these folks, and it is really enjoyable to read.

I would just like to say how much I love this story you've written. There is so much passion, creativity, and angst. I've read it over and over and most definitely can say it rivals a lot of novels out and about right now. I can not wait until you release "The Next Factor".

Please get TNF out! i'll love you forever!

i love this story

amazing story

This chapter is so gripping. This is such a great story that I have to read it over and over. Please keep writing.

I think u should publish this story ! I have read it about 5 times !

And I'm back again to reread for the third time

i swear, woman. sometime i literally just wanna jump right down your throat and kill you while reading this fic. But i justcantquit reading it. it attracts me in this kind of very crazy level. and i blame you ;)

CONTINUE PLEASE I 3 IT! _

Hi! I've been reading your fic and I read you're on hiatus so I don't know if you'll read this, but I like to review even if this fic has been finished. I loved it, I was so hooked and I even stayed up all night to finish the chapters. Uhmmm..what can I cay..I really hate Bella in this chapter..she's so selfish..poor poor Edward..and I cried reading this write so well. I'm moving on to the next chapter :)

I just wanted to let you know that I live in the place you mentioned and I was squealing because I've been reading your story, by the way it's awesome even though I'm sooo late in commenting, and when you mentioned the name I lost it !

Wow, epic story! You grew your characters so much, took them through so much - I thoroughly enjoyed the ride! Thank you for not ending the story with the wedding or the birth but including a good bit of their lives afterwards. I look forward to reading your other works. Thank you for sharing a wonderful story!

Anonymous reviews that bash and are intended to make an author feel like shit are worthless imo. It's soo easy for a reader to hide behind a keyboard and critisize another's work, and this one makes me laugh, because obviously the reader likes the story or he/she would not have hung around for 28 chapters. That type of review suggests some type of ownership of your story. That person needs to remember, that this website is free. This person does not realize the work that authors put into this. No appreciation. Selfish. I could go on for days but I won't. As you can guess, I love this story and frankly am bummed that there are only 11 or so chapters left! I hope to see a sequel. Sorry for rambling.