 Destinysfailure 2009-12-13 . chapter 9Ohh Lebrezie. you know how much I'd like to predict, but in the end I'm always wrong, and your endings are better anyways, so...lol. Yeah, I guess I need to just say this chapter was awesome. Roxas sounds so awesome in this story. I couldn't imagine him any sexier.
oh wait.
I could.
xDD
JUST KIDDING! or am i...? lol. anyways, good chapter. Keep going, please, and SOON!
Love, as always,
Destinysfailure. |
 Kiome-Yasha 2009-12-12 . chapter 9OMG, I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner ><, I feel like he's getting in the way between Namine and Roxas. Even if Roxas has some evil intentions, I know deep down he's actually falling for Namine X3. Keep going and updating! ;D |
 LightNamine 2009-12-03 . chapter 9This is so good, please continue! |
 Wind Kunai 2009-11-30 . chapter 9!
can't wait for the next one!
this one made my stomach churn!
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 jenyflo5483 2009-11-30 . chapter 9O MY EFFIN POTATOES ON A BUN.
That chapter was so awesome, wonderful, entertaining, mind-capturing- /shot
I loved it 8D <3
You mix in all the characters so WELL!
I am officially obsessed with this story. 8D
OMFG. I really can't wait until the next chapter. XDD 8DD
Predictions;
I think Riku randomly came back because he knows, or maybe senses, the trouble that's going to be made with Roxas. I dunno, but it's my imagination and thoughts that make me think that. 8D XD
Namine is definitely the reason why Roxas suddenly has a conscience and I really hope, and I'm pretty sure, that he'll listen to it because he's going to fall in love with Namine.
Ooh, I so think that Riku will react either, jealous, (when he finds out about Namine and Roxas), or really mad and protective of Namine. I so wanna read that. 8D
Uh, this are only assumptions and predictions that I think will happen in my little wild head. LMAO. I really hope I'm right. Or at least partly. lolol 8D
Jesus. I'm still swooning over the really cute, and fluff-filled moment Namine and Roxas had. XD
I can't wait for the next chapter. x3 <3
-Jeny |
 kinmoku2 2009-11-29 . chapter 9Hm those are good questions...Anyway! I LOVED this chapter! So much going on and the whole Riku kisses her one cheeks thing...yep Riku like likes Nami-chan.
And by the way
"If only Riku knew what it was like to kiss him under the light of a street lamp, or dance with him until the music stopped...or well, she actually hoped he didn’t know what that was like…
She shuddered as the image of Riku and Roxas kissing on her front porch set her mind free, not only did it disgust her, but it saved her from another moment of Roxas worshiping."
Made me laugh so hard!XD
Also, I love the rose thing, very well done. I can't deny that I was swooning over Roxas when he did that.
And Kairi lol love how she dragged Sora away. But I think maybe Riku's sudden appearance has something to do with Roxas appearing himself like that's what trigged it? *Shrugs* I think he could possible be something supernatural himself, but I dunno.
Roxas having new feelings? Hmm I guess the more time he spends with her the more things grow? Eh I think for awhile he'll push those new feelings aside but later act on them.
I say Riku and him should get into a fight over Nami *nods head* yep that's what I say.
Well that's all!
P.S. Seen New Moon yet? I did and I went opening night and the line was CRAZY!
Update soon!:D |
 Void 2009-11-29 . chapter 9 loven the fic can't wate for the next chapter! |
 HideYourFeathers 2009-11-28 . chapter 9UGH! You really need to update ASAP before I go psycho here.
In other words, fantastic story, hurry up and update!
Hmm...It seems like there's something suspicious going on with Riku. At first I was thinking maybe he actually did come back to sort of protect Namine, but I dunno...or hey, maybe that's actually what he's doing :P
Roxas is starting to FEEL?! *gasp*
Can't wait to see how that develops...
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE..
Update soon! ASAP!
-Feathers :) |
 XShiori-chanX 2009-11-28 . chapter 9that was AMAZING! EXCELLANT! BRILLIANT! WONDERFUL! BEAUTIFUL! every good word in the dictionary! i give it from 1 to 10, google. XD |
 RavenFollower13 2009-11-28 . chapter 5I would like to know why/what Roxas is trying to warn Namine about, but that's just me. I LOVE your story (I would find a better word, but currently I have no greater emotion then love. Obsessed sounds creepy) and I hope you write more!! Please! I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 NightRaven13 2009-11-28 . chapter 9YAY! I'm glad you're still working ** this one!
I gotta say, I really loved this chapter...especially loved the fact that everyone was in this one! (Even Sora...yay! ^-^)
Anyway...do continue soon! The suspense is going to kill me untill then!
-NightRaven13 (=^.^=) |
 MoonlitMelody 2009-11-28 . chapter 9Yay, new chappy! *does happy dance*
Riku totally came back to keep an eye on Namine. He is so head-over-heels for her, it's a miracle she doesn't acknowledge it.
Roxas suddenly has a conscience because Namine is just THAT AWESOME! What other reason can there be? XD
And Riku's gonna try and kick Roxas' a**, but he will ultimately fail epically. XDD
Can't wait for the "INTENSE" chapter. ^-^ |
 DemyxPlaysMySitar 2009-11-28 . chapter 9I shall predict:
1)Riku came back because of Roxas. He probably knew that Roxas wasn't done with her yet, and because he more than likely is in love with her, wanted to make sure she didn't get harmed.
2) Roxas realises that there is something about namine that makes him feel good, but he has to kill her to live, hence the guilt. I think he will listen to it, almost like a Twilight theme xD
3) Riku will flip, maybe ask Namine to move away and live with him, or Riku will try to make Roxas jealous somehow.
Yea, there :3
And I meant in my last review, I had a dream that I was reading this at a certain place and at a certain time like a few months ago :P
It's quite weird, deja vu xD
Update soon~!
Kitty
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 Princess Nairina 2009-11-28 . chapter 9Wow, as always it was most impressive. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I came up with a prediction for you: Okay, so I was thinking about Nobodies, and how they can't feel. So I was thinking that in your story, Roxas is a Nobody and he's trying to in essence, get his "heart", as in emotions and feelings and a conscience, etc. But to do this, he's been using girls, hence "victim" and "womanizer". Love is one of the two most powerful emotions, so he goes after the girls, trying to get himself to feel. For some reason, Namine is making him feel a little, and I'm guessing that's either because she actually loves him, or because she has such strong emotions and/or heart, that some of it is rubbing off on Roxas.
Well, that's all I got for now. Once again, thank you for the great chapter. =) |
 kinmoku2 2009-11-19 . chapter 8Sorry for the late review. School I'm tellin' ya..
But I'm super happy you updated! Yeah!:D
And um...that's really creepy. But why would Riku have the same dream? And does Riku like her as in ya know like her like her?
I wonder what that dream means!? GRR! Update soon plz! LOVE this story!:D |
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