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flymetothemoon 4/3/12 . chapter 3
Very cute lol And you had me at the 'rated-t' part :))
Mikka Tenshi 8/11/10 . chapter 2
I tried the link. But no results. :c

The story's great by the way..
Tezuka R 4/26/09 . chapter 3
WaH I want an update its a cute story i love it!
Acquisitive 4/18/09 . chapter 3
Great story, very adorable . I love your style and I love you made Lacus xD. Looking forward to the next part(s?) once you update, so keep it up ;D.
Shadow Kitsune67 4/14/09 . chapter 3
YAY chapter 3. ;D This was incredibly sexy O:. Poor Athrun not able to go any farther than that though xD.
cagallifangurl 4/14/09 . chapter 3
Omg this is so adorably sexy! [: i love it and i hope that u'll write a lot more after this! [: thanks for updating and please update soon!
Hegodart 4/14/09 . chapter 3
Wow

loved this chapter.

it was very swet and i LOVED the asucaga secret parts!

GREAT JOB!
SkInIr 4/14/09 . chapter 2
wah! kawaii!
An Instant King 4/14/09 . chapter 2
I have the official art of that scene... cost me $7 at a convention. But I have both the Cagalli and Lacus one, and one of just Cagalli.

Another good chapter, I like how Athrun scooped her up and held her bikini on.

Makes me wonder if Lacus sometimes uses her powers for evil... although stealing stuff from kids isn't evil, just kind of mean. But I'm sure Lacus left no evidence. Lacus is very observant of Cagalli, and how gorgeous she is. I always feel that Cagalli outshines Lacus... but Lacus is undoubtedly good at manipulating Cagalli into a cute little bikini.

The link from the previous chapter didn't work...

Makes me sad. But seeing Cagalli nestled up against Athrun makes me happy. Well, not seeing it visually, but seeing it in my head.

AIK
An Instant King 4/14/09 . chapter 1
Ah, this chapter was very fun. I wonder what Athrun will do to mend the gap.

Over all well written, just one thing sticks out. Lacus's should be Lacus' because her name ends in an s. The other thing is that Meer did not in fact have her breasts augmented in the series, she was already overly endowed. Although I think for the sake of your story it works.

Poor Athrun, he just wanted to spend time with Cagalli in her bikini...

I wonder if he would glare menacingly at the other guys oogling Cagalli. Somehow I think Kira would be unhappy with them too, both for Cagalli and for Lacus.

There's some great fanart about Athrun looking at Cagalli's cleavage. I'll post it in the Asucaga forum.

I look forward to the next chapter, which is already up, and to getting to know you in the Asucaga forum.

Oh, also Athrun and Cagalli didn't break up, they just took some time apart. Athrun returned to Orb at the end of the series as an Admiral. Also, Fukuda has repeatedly displayed them as an official couple. Although taking a break might be considered breaking up...?

AIK
crisostomoilovejil 3/18/09 . chapter 2
omg! will something happen? ;))
NatsuLucyNatsu 1/12/09 . chapter 2
lol that's something haha saw the pic and the crab looks naughty haha
asga 1/9/09 . chapter 2
o.O so it is your fanfic? So good, I read chapter one also and like it. Sorry I didn't review the first chapter

Btw I am rubenz at MT
Hegodart 1/9/09 . chapter 2
i very much like this story..

its so fun..

and relaxing!

great job..please continue!
euremi 1/9/09 . chapter 2
Something hot is about to happen!
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