Aww. Aww, just... aww. That's so adorable. And angsty. And perfect. :)

Excellently done. Heartwrenching and poignant, and well written to boot. You've got a winner here. :D

More a portrait of Gabriel, actually, than of Crawly (nice to see you use his original demonic name). Very nicely written, and with a - or, rather THE central problem: What's all that eternal love and forgiveness REALLY about?

It's all that asking of questions that's the problem, and Gabriel is very close to asking a few of his own.

Very nice!