 Joken 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Pretty good!^^ |
 Aero Tendo 2009-01-11 . chapter 1Good story so far and I liked the point in time that you started from. Still, I wonder just what Bonnie has planned for Ron in that janitor's closet? After all, she could have just locked him in and thrown away the key, denying any and all knowledge of where he was until it was too late.
Hms, if I had to guess... she was going to do something very incriminating to break them up. So to answer Ron's question... yes, he should be hyperventilating AND thinking of using his mystical powers to get out of there. |
 LoPe21 2009-01-04 . chapter 1Oh man ive been hoping that you would eventually write a sequel to shooting straight. This doesn't disappoint. I don't know where you're going with this but it would be awesome if this turned into a Ron/Bon. Keep it up. |
 bigherb81 2009-01-04 . chapter 1Man hell hath no fury am I right? Great story looking forward to part 2 to see exactly how Bonnie plans on getting her vengence. |
 MR. SE7EN 2009-01-03 . chapter 1cool but kinda confusing keep going |
 Shrike176 2009-01-03 . chapter 1Curious to see what Bonnie has in mind for Kim and Ron. As someone whose gotten of the fics that involve everyone being expected to bend over and take it when Bonnie acts like... well herself; only to be instantly forgiven by those same people the minute she says oops, I enjoyed this stories predecessor.
Despite this, I do enjoy a good Ron/Bon story. As such I was hoping to see a sequel to Straight Shooter; if for no other reason than to see the always amusing reaction Kim has to the whole Ron/Bon thing.
Good story, look forward to the rest! |
 captainkodak1 2009-01-03 . chapter 1This looks like it's going to be interesting. |