 XxXThirteenXBlackXRosesXxX 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Nice :) A little OOC but really sweet. |
 dancesthroughlife 2009-04-28 . chapter 1Aww...this is cute and happy. And one of the few songfics that I could actually read I might add. You did a good job of incorporating the song. :) |
 madame.alexandra 2009-01-03 . chapter 1I read all your stuff, you know.
That was very sweet, and light. I enjoyed it very much :) Still anticipating JEPK, but a nice hold over. I didn't care for the song too much, except the prayer/sing part in the middle, but perhaps that's because I hate Sara Evans.
Good job, though!
~Alexa |
 xStephanie.Raex 2009-01-03 . chapter 1*dreamy sigh*
Now that was really cute. :D I wish I could've read the story before you did it. lol.
I really liked it. It's definitely one of my favorites.
And you know you are still /amazing/ at Jack. :D *steals him* |
 Willofthewisp 2009-01-03 . chapter 1Cute! I'm usually not a fan of song-fics, but this fit so well. I like the detail that Jack has not actually said those three little words, but that Elizabeth knows anyway. The writers have said the less Jack says in a situation, the more honest/serious he's being, so that is so in-character. This was steamy without being smutty, romantic without being cheesy...dialogue was spot-on. Very enjoyable read. |
 Florencia7 2009-01-03 . chapter 1This is BEAUTIFUL! It's so wonderful, the way you portray them... so in-character, so touching, so beautiful... Gorgeous scene. I love it! |
 XxIcexX 2009-01-03 . chapter 1You posted it back up... for moi? O: Was it my incessant nagging that led to this? I hope it was - it'll prove, yet again, that when I nag it really works. -evil grin-
"Sing for me?" Jack asked in a whisper, and Elizabeth blinked before she frowned a little.
I haven't a clue in the world as to why I can imagine him asking that so well; I can hear it in my head, and lordy, too bad Jack is fictional. /I'd/ sing for him, if my voice did not pierce the ear-drums of all those about me.
This was cute, just as I recall; fluffy as a newborn chick, though perhaps fluff isn't bad all the time. A few lines I would have altered here and there, but nothing horrendous and it was NOSTALGIC (told you, told you, told you!) to read this again. It reminds me of the good old days, back when we all posted more often, had a trillion reviews, and had more readers. :3
Thanks for posting this love - I really appreciate it. ^_^
Ex to the fine, sexy O,
Liz |
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