OMIGOSH I WANNA READ MORE NOW! COME ON WRITE MORE LIKE NOW! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW! !

Wow, that's really good, if you finish this story (and i hop you do) please put it up for me to see or send me a message and a like to it, your very talented and i hope to read more from you :D

You need to finish this!

This sounds great! I am eagerly anticipating more.

wheres the rest!

this is a really good story and i really wish you would finish it because i want/NEED to know what happens next, hah

thankkss

Hey! I'm new and your story was the first i read. i liked it but it had loads of punctuation mistakes. sorry i just had to point it out it was nagging at me ah! lol nah i did like the story but you left it at a cliffhanger i want to know what happens! Why did you make it soo captivating? but Im going to read the real story - Ihavent read it, i saw the word YAOI and i needed to read the rest lol anyways thanks for the story

I Liked it a lot...post some more!

when erin goes omigosh you dont need to put the () there they are totally unnecssicary. Sorry if i misspelled that but i havenever had to use it in writting before. Plus i suck a spelling half the time and the other half i have checked how to spellthose words so many times that i will never misspellthem is weired 'cause english is my best class. "However,his brothers..." that part would flow better if you removed the , after however and left the one right before "or hoped".your storys you have read Lord of the Rings you should read the first tow chapters of a story called"Anywhere".If you chose haldir,romance and in

-progress you will find it pretty dosnet seem like a well writteen story when you read it so when i reveiwed it instead of just reveiwing it i got her email and found out she is not a native english speaker so i thought i would try to recrute some reviewers. you know 2 heads better than one more the a good story with an awsome plot and i thought you were an awsome writer and that you might spot something i missed and you might have an awsome idea for her , yeah weired thing to ask but it just seemed to make sense. so yeah if you do read it she messes up 3 and tree. . If you read all of my half asleep ramblings than your amazinly patien.