AW! That was such a great story! I didn't realize Home Depot and KMart were so old, either! I saw a few spelling errors, though. But only a few. And, why didn't you upload each chapter separately? But anyways - fantastic story! Great job! :-D I'd give it a 9 out of 10.

awesome! you kept them so wonderfully in character and described the whole surrounding so perfect, i could all but see them a few years in the future celebrating christmas with their grandkids when junior and her family come visiting.

Hi Donna, I LOVE everone of your BBM stores, they are just so well done & kept as ture to the characters as you can too. I keep coming back to read your stores that i have fall in love with (which is all of them), over & over again, they are just that good. I hope you keep up such excellent stores.

So very much appreciated
Kinnat

P.S yes this is the same review in AFF, I'm just that lazy that i couldn't think of something else SORRY

It's over? Just Kidding, great story as usual. I really enjoyed it.

Hi Donna
This was another masterpiece to be sure! Ya had me scared when LD took Jack and Ennis couldn't find him...thank goodness he was in time...

I hope you had a festive wonderful new years! I hope 2009 brings you lots of good ideas!! We all benefit. :)

Jen