Dammit, Pony, why didn't you wear a helmet!

Oh, cool, so Phantom's basically like an angel. I hadn't thought to wonder if he was non-human.

Oh my gosh, he was killed by a sweeper? How gross! Haha, ew!

So Des frees the soul before death and brings the Reaper, who brings death, and Phantom deals with the soul. Basically. Yeah? Yeah.

So the bruise probably is a forming tattoo, I think, like that tattoo he had before that showed when Des would be returning.

"I heard the hinges shriek like a cat with its tail stuck in a bicycle wheel."
Lol, nice simile.

Haha, what a cool cat Des is. Sweet ending to this chapter.. "Stop, drop and roll don't work in hell."

I thought so! I mean, I didn't think of Des coming back to deal with these stupid robbers, but I was thinking of what he'd do if he was still around if Soda was shot like Sheila.. and guess now I'll actually find out.

Heh, aha, so their prank was taken straight from the Desmond Morgan handbook..

"He still fussed at me about not wearing a helmet"
Well, that is a dumb move.

love this story

Fantastic story.