It kind of confused me when the whole thing is bunched together like that. I know that I never read the book...I have however watched the movie just last night...and it said that Marley was a HE not a SHE...

Great job though. I liked it. It was sad.

Um ok you should write more please

This was very confusing.

woop!

well done x

This was sad

Loved it

Uh, you need to go to the next line after someone says something. that's really what bothers me.

I liked it, though.

Cheerio!

It's alright, but you have some errors. In the first line, you call Marley a "her," when in tghe book it states that Marley is a "he." You also have some grammar errors. The story is pretty good though)

You need to space everything out and make this slightly longer than just three-hundred words.

Hey