O... Wonderful story. The characters are very distinguishable & I'm loving Allen & Kanda's funny little relationship. It's always interesting watching such an incongruous pair interact ^^

OMG thats kinda scary!
but i have a feeling that kanda is worried about allen and that is why he burst in to try to save him!!Yay kanda the hero!hehehe fangirlishness is kicking in!!
*squeal* yay kanda is going to save allen from tykki that bastard!!
*giggle* *blush* kanda is so heroic!
hehehe sorry im 50% fangirl and proud to be because it gives me a reason to squeal and giggle when i see my favorite dgm characters!;)
well update!and keep on writing!

lovelovelove this story. <3
Wow, cant wait to see Kanda's reaction.. xD
Please, it would be so amazing if you updated this! :3

The sword is the sharpest when protecting someone eh? Now, I wonder who? *Whines* When are you going to update? Sunday the week after? YOU'd better update by then because right now I'm staring at the calendar...

Great plot, great style, great story altogether! Hope You`ll update soon!

what happen after?? i wanna know!! pls update the story!!

oo~h! @.@ its Tyki, isnt it?

Yo, what happened to "you have my word."? You went over 100. :( I want an update please! LUFFIES, anon.

Allen just got rick rolled dude!

And Kanda comes in their like he's a super hero or something and sees none other than Tyki. Uh-oh, its about to a what? A boy fight!

this is a really good story... please update! i'm dying from suspense! Congratulations, you're a really good writer =)

I LOVE it! i don't know since when, but i believe ever since you started writing this story i kept my eyes on update, sorry for not reviewing before. and i just love everything in this story.
i hope you still consider this review since it's still early wendesday here. keep going i love this story!

=)
i just happened to stumble across your fanfic XD
and its really good ^^
please update soon
im looking forward to reading more of it XPP

I wonder who is this new person!! I can't wait to know!!

this is awsome i don't know if you got the reviews you needed, but i thought this story was on hiatus and found it by chance while searching for decent fanfictions to read. i kinda missed the date for reviews since i just found it today. but please update a long chapter next time.

SO. Hell yes I was looking forward to it!! xD But that chapter was a bit of a let down huh? ;-; And the Noah's outfits look like the espada which is a little offputting but whatevs D.Gray is back! Well ... in November! xD Anyway, for reals though. xD I do like where this story is headed, and it sucks that we're just getting to the good part and you gave us a cliffie you meanie. /sniffle But I forgive you. I just have a feeling the man behind the door is Cross but why oh why does everyone think he's some kind of child abuser. -_- It bugs me but well it's AU and I guess if that's the way the story goes I have no right to complain. Hmm ... well I like the plot, and actually, I think the most IC person is Lavi, believe it or not. xD Kanda's pretty good but Allen pretty much has to be OOC for the story to even work so I don't mind that. The only thing that takes away from the story is, well you know it, the grammar errors. There aren't as many as you seem to think though so dun worry too much! But sometimes you make up words. xD That being said, I dunno if anyone approached you as a beta yet, but if they haven't I would be more than happy too. ^_^ I've never actually done it before but we used to edit each others papers all the time back in SUPA so it can't be that different right. >_> I'm ... deciding whether or not to double major in english but maybe the fact that I could do it makes me qualified? xD I don't have an account though, but I will give you my e-mail so you can tell me one way or the other. Sometimes it doesn't show though, so I'm gonna put spaces in ... kmaynar1 @ binghamton . edu So hopefully that works. ^_^ Anyway, let me know if you could use my help please, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Good job, and thanks!