|Reviews for Finding Home|
| monika116k 11/3/09 . chapter 4
Wow I thought this waas pretty awesome! I just read the story from the beginning. I definetly got a little confused as to why Bella left so out of nowhere, but I guess I see her point. I wish for jacob not to come back into her life though. Good job writing...can't wait for more!
| feebstar 10/19/09 . chapter 4
Hey there, really lovign this story so far. I noticed not many people had reviewed, so I thought I would, just so you know people are enjoying it.
keep up the good work
| outtayourface 10/17/09 . chapter 4
Aww, that was so sweet what Bella did for Harry! Like I said before, I love the traits that you've given Bella. Headstrong, independent, and just, I love her already. (And no she did not seem stalkerish lolz)
And for some strange reason, I keep picturing Hagrid as Harry. Lol, maybe I'm weird.
Hm, I'm guessing that Edward was in that seat before Bella? Don't tell me! I want to be surprised. Can't wait for your next update and see you on ADF!
| outtayourface 10/17/09 . chapter 3
I love the Alice perspective. It was really refreshing. I can't wait to see the plotting unfold. Great job again!
| outtayourface 10/17/09 . chapter 2
HAHAHA! I will never look at the Lemons saying the same way. Man, that had me dying. Edward is a very funny man. Btw, I hope you're not talking about your own experience with the skunk spraying!
But all I have to say is "Ouch"! Poor Edward. "It was fun"? Oh no she didn't! I really hope that never happened to you. That really broke my heart.
And I am loving this Henry character. I want to give him a big hug! lol
| outtayourface 10/17/09 . chapter 1
I really like it! I love the attention you put into details, especially the qualities of Bella and her thought process. I can't wait to see how you are going to introduce Edward (btw, I loved the comparison that you made with his hair and autumn leaves. Very creative!) Anyway, can't wait to continue reading and you're doing a great job!
| michalice 10/17/09 . chapter 4
Im liking this story, i love how you have different characters with their own POV and let them give their thoughts and ides into the B/E situation.
Looking forward to see what happens next
| nermalasu 10/17/09 . chapter 4
i wonder if she had left right after she had her feeling if maybe she would have seen him? perhaps he was the one in the bar stool that was still warm that she sat in? and i don't think she came off as stalkerish. i know i've had that moment where i have seen someone in a bar before that caught my eye and you are hoping to see them there again. great chapter!
| nermalasu 10/17/09 . chapter 3
uh oh...now that alice and angela know they are gonna be thrown together whether they like it or not! should be pretty fun to see how they are going to get them together! great chapter!
| nermalasu 10/17/09 . chapter 2
man no one can catch a break with their relationships can they? poor edward, that's gotta be tough to think that you are in a loving relationship with a person just to find out you were a glorified booty call. and now with both of them checking each other out but laying off of the opposite sex, they just better hope their friends and family don't get wind of it! great chapter!
| nermalasu 10/17/09 . chapter 1
man that's gotta be rough being in her position with jake. good thing she didn't sleep with him or that would have really complicated things. that also was probably an indicator that she really shouldn't be with him either. i'm glad she was able to go somewhere where she wouldn't be judged and had friends to help. great first chapter, looking forward to see what's gonna happen!
| jennlynnfs 10/16/09 . chapter 4
I just caught up with your story. I found it over at lion_lamb on lj.
I have to say that I'm intrigued. I like how you've set up Edward and Bella to be coming out of long term relationships and are at a point where they're re-evaluating their life. It sounds like they're going through their quarter life crisis. Everyone goes through it and I think you've captured it well for both of them.
I also like how they both feel a pull to each other and yet they're both hesitant about acting on it b/c of their past experiences. In so many stories, the pull is there, but then all of a sudden they're sexing it up. :) I'm enjoying the pacing so far (but I wouldn't mind them actually getting to meet each other soon).
Anyway, I'm eager to see where Bella's new found determination will lead her. I hope that Edward isn't too depressed that he's not going to be open to her attention.
Oh, and no need for a preview! I can wait. :) (I didn't review b/c I wanted one.)
| dreaming in black and white 10/2/09 . chapter 4
Bella definitely doesn't sound like a stalker! I'd love to know where Edward is right now, though...
Another great chapter, and thanks for updating! I really like Harry x :)
| moonbeam228 9/26/09 . chapter 4
I really like your story and what you have done with it. I wish you could move it a bit faster so we could see the characters interact with each other. Great start so far!
| Angel on Air 9/26/09 . chapter 4
That really was a fantastic chapter, no wonder you said it was difficult to write! You developed Bella's feelings so well along the chapter, they were all so intense, I just got caught with the story, with the scene, with everything! I felt I was right there, next to Bella at The Lion's Den reading her mind... Can't wait for next chapter, maybe Epov? Hheheh, whatever you do, I'm sure it will be amazing.
Update as soon as possible!
-Angel on Air