Oh my gosh, you cannot leave it with such a cliff hanger! Amazing story, couldn't stop reading it. (: keep going please!

Aaaahhhh! You CANNOT just leave it there! This is a reeeally good story! Please, please, please continue:'(

You should make ryan a good guy. It's easy to make Edward a character that's already been fleashed out in the books be the main attraction, it's proves your a better writer when you try something different then Ed & Bella

i think he sould be the bad guy and then have edward come save her from him and have edward change for her

you should make ryan mean i dont know why you just should, i hate him lolz you should make him kiddnap her or something for some drama. and then edward should come to the rescue haha. really good. ur a great writer update soon. xxthx

I like it when Edward is all protective :)

please UD soon

Okay I couldn't read this, it's too much. It's not really a well thought out story from the beginning, that's usually how I test out stories and this one is not a good one

i think you should keep ryan the way he is and the story is really good so far

adddd moooore chappptersss! Miss Belle please!

05-24-09 Why havent you updated I dont care about any thing else inless you update!

I really like your story but I think you need to make it longer in the sense you need to write more discription. I find it to just be a little choppy. But very good idea and very good ways of acting it out. Please continue with this story!

uhm yeah keep ryan the way he is and before anything really bad happens , have edward come and beat the shit out of him .

AWESOME!1

keep ryan the way he is i think it will keep the story interesting

wow thats scary plz continue this is really getting ver interesting leave ryan the way he is