This really was an unusual pairing, but I liked it. It was very well written and your Angel and Max were true to the characters. I can't wait to see the next pairings.

They is not much wrong. It's wonderfully written. I am wondering what happened to the rest of the Flock.

The writing is fine. ;)
It's great, actually. I like it. It's different than some of your other stuff, less thick and all, but it's still really good.
I like Angel. She's very... Angel-like. It's perfect, really. I can see her turning into this girl. I think that's the track the character is on.
Good job.

ohmydearsweetjesus.

That's a good thing, not a bad one.

I've been in a super-shitty mood for a while, and while this fic didn't yank me all the way out of it... it made me feel a little better for a while.

It's good. We don't have enough femmeslash here, and seeing this fic appear as I pointlessly refreshed the M-rated section was like having my mind read -- like someone knew what I wanted to see and gave it to me.

OK, now I'm just getting sentimental, so I'll wrap up with a: that was awesome.