All 7 chapters where supper, and I hope that chapter 8 will be put up soon:)

~Facegirl~

When will you post the next chpter? ^^

very good!
I expect the next chapter ^^

I really like where this story is going. I hope to see the next chpater soon. ;)

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Very good story! :-)
I excpect the next!

Hi,I usually not comment, because I never learned this language, but now I have to.
I thought that the first 2 chapters are little slow for my taste, so I was a little sceptical when I started to read today the new one, BUT
I love this chapter, it is so funny, Murdock is so Murdock.
Hannibal's last words just the right ones.
It's getting better and better, so keep up the good "work".
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you!
thecathedral

I really like this story. It's got a good plot, easy to read, and I love Murdock! Thanks for this and keep up the good work :D

Good start. Please finish it. It is spelled "strait jacket."

Oh this is awesome! I like it a lot. You have BA and Murdock's banter spot on! Also I read your other story, with spreading the love Murdock, I thought he was totally adorable

I definitely like this concept...TAT doing a murder mystery...with HM being the prime suspect, of course! Your dialogue is very true to the characters and the flashbacks on Murdock's part are intriguing. Please keep going; I'm interested to see what happens next!

This looks like an interesting plot, but I've got a few questions about it.

Well, the first is more of a comment really. The "news" paper Face bought seems to do an aweful lot of speculating on the front page. Speculation isn't news; it's speculation. A newspaper would just mention the facts: doctor dead, patient suspected, hospital has poor history of diagnosing patients. A journalist can't just question a hospital's competence because he believes only sane people can commit murders. He should mention the facts and leave the jumping to conclusions to the readers.

Second, why does the Team want to break out Murdock now? Don't they realise that breaking Murdock out now is going to make him look guilty? I'd sooner think Hannibal or Face would go undercover at the VA to try and find out what had happened and clear Murdock's name, than that they would break him out because they need his help on a mission. How selfish of them is that?

When Face and BA come to get Murdock he is in a straight jacket. There is no mention of anyone undoing the jacket, yet there is a mention of Murdock wiping his hand down his face. Has Murdock become a escapologist? If not, and the jacket is done up properly, Murdock's hands would be in the arms of the jacket, hugging his sides.

Lastly, I'd like to point out that dialogue needs to be punctuated too. Before the closing quotation mark there should be a comma, a period or a question mark (depending on what follows the dialogue). Here there usually was nothing, which in combination with the use of single quotes, often made sentences hard to read as I didn't quite catch on as where the dialogue was supposed to end.