You took something so simple and made it into a really nice piece. I really enjoyed it but I have to say I don't think I'm liking Joker all that much right now.

Oh...My...G! That was one of the most simply romantic stories I have ever read!

Was it something I said? Hahaha. Hilarious. Great characterisation for Shepard and Kaiden.

Haha, this had me smiling!
It sounded great and even like it was actually used in the game =]
(I've never been colonist though if I am honest =] )

And when Joker came down, made me smile. If you ever write something like this again, I would just giggle and be completely happy =]

Lennatha

Awesome! Your characterization is perfect! I'm looking forward to more. :)

Excellent short story!

Excellent job. I love the 'comfort food' idea, and Joker was fantastic.

nice fluff
very cool

Nice. Sweet without being overly treacly. Loved Joker's line at the end.

Very beautifully written. You should be proud of yourself. It makes you kind of hate Joker a little bit. lol.

I look forward to hearing more from you. :)

Aw... cute. I like it!

Ha! Good story! I like the how you added in the fact she had a brother, hadn't thought about that. And milk, peanut butter and graham crackers sounds awesome, I'll have to try it sometime.