Your writing is so detailed.
I want to see more,this still frozen in April while now is late September...

Yays, such a nice episode this was. For some reason I got it in my head that Sheena really seemed like a skittish cat in this chapter, but that must have been what you were going for, or maybe she's always like a skittish cat and I just now noticed it... Hm, well if Sheena's a cat, I wonder what Zelos is... He could be so many things... XD Uh-oh, my imagination is off and running now...

Fave parts!:

“A rambunctious butterfly.”- I have to say, I wasn't quite sure where this sentence was going at first, but it made me laugh. For some reason the word “rambunctious” and “butterfly” give me the funniest image.

“A banshee house-call.”- Oh boy, I have to admit you lost me for a few seconds, I literally had to take a time out and laugh whilst shaking my head, because I could just picture the whole scene perfectly. Only Zelos Wilder gets banshee house-calls. XD

Oh boy, I was just so enthralled by the whole chapter that I couldn't pick out very many favorite parts. They were both so in character this chapter, and I just enjoy reading your stuff so much that it's a wonder I've survived this long away from it. Thanks for the read Faux, and I'm happy to give you your 40th review. ^-^ That makes 10 a chapter! Congrats on that!
Liger out.

Egads, I can't express how bad I am feeling about this absence of mine, especially after all my speeches about you not leaving. *sigh* Oh well, onto the review... And you know, I've been gone so long that I actually had to check and see if I had even reviewed for chapter 3, which I didn't, so that meant I didn't read it... I've missed TWO updates! Please forgive me, I have sinned!

Ahem, yeah, so in compensation for my late...ness, you get two reviews back-to-back! Yay, yes? *nod* Yes. So I'll start with my favorite parts:

Yes, “All in a day's work, really.” That says it all, Zelos, may as well have fun doing what you're good at right?

I loved the Rheaird scene! Lol The one “Regal bravely shared with her.” - XD Raine must have been in a really bad mood. For some reason that little sentence really made me laugh.

“He had to wonder at the fact that she would rather walk to the Tower of Salvation...” - I must tell you, at this point I was just sitting here reading, nodding my head with this big stupid grin on my face thinking, Oh this is gonna get so good!

And was it ever! What a nice fluff-fest. Naturally I loved it.^-^ And the best part? I have another chapter to read! And you have another review coming!
The happy Liger is out.

Aw I loved so much this chapter too ! So sweet, so cute, so... And I love as always how you put us in their thoughts and feelings. They're so IC and your writing is really nice to read.
T'was cool to see them postgame, together ^_^ I was completly in the story.
Waiting for the other chapters ! :D

I give you...A REVIEW! TAH-DAH!

LOL So, anyway, amazing, as always! I had totally forgotten I hadn't read this chapter. But now I'm upset I did! It was so good! As expected of you, I'm sure.

UPDATE SOON? Yes?

~Nexus

Aw, I love these so much. I love how subtley yet strongly you write Sheelos. It's heart rendering. :D
Keep it up! These are great. :3

Woo! Beautiful as always. I've been waiting forever, so I was thrilled to see you updated. I loved it. So in character, all the way through. Amazing. XD

Ah, you did it again, make me melt into a puddle o' goo by the the time the ending rolled around. Liked how you casually opened things, referred to the other characters and past events here and there... and I loved how Zelos's bombardment of letters to Sheena had played a role in causing them to come together again.

I think I freaked when Sheena "giggled", as I imagined it in a very un-sheena-like way. Dammit, she's not supposed to be girly (aside from her ability to cook, sew, and a liking of flowers)! It gives me the creeps! But the rest of the fic made up for it. It was just... very sweet, and endearing, I suppose, I can't figure out how else to describe it! It had that warm and fuzzy feeling all over.

Oh, and I laughed when Sheena accused of him being lonely, because god forbid he admit it (unles he's trying to do it in an annoying way) while being totally obvious.

I so love you right now (in a non-awkward, completely platonic way, of course)! I'm going to visit my family in Connecticut tomorrow and I won't be back until August ;_; That means no Sheelos for me! That makes me depressed.

But this just made everything so much better! I was going to send you a PM, but I never got around to it. Sorry about the college books, sounds like it would suck. At least you're finally out of high school. That must make things a little better, right?

I'm happy that you haven't lost your touch--not that I expected you to. You still have your Sheelos magic, and since I've been deprived of it for so long, it was even better. I loved the theme, mainly since I just love the rain. I watched this giant storm we had in May outside, standing under our porch thing. It was fun.

Well, I hope your summer goes well. You won't be hearing from me for awhile, but I hope you update while I'm gone, so then I'll have something to read for when I get back. I'll forgive you if you don't, but it would be nice.

*o* I'm just in love again...
I really liked the first part with all Zelos'thoughts and memories. We can feel so well everything. We know who and how he really is. I always love this, how you capture this in your stories...

The scene between Sheena and Zelos is so lovely... I like the angst in the beginning... And the end =' )

I'm sorry not to specify more. I just don't have the required brain :p
Awesome work again !!

*o* I liked this one too... I often have troubles liking a Sheelos story about the past, but this one was very... As always, well thought.

I lost my words now (as always) so... Great work on it ! It was really a nice piece, I loved how Sheena and Zelos are ! And it was nice to see Corrine as well.

I just saw the third chapter was here *o* Aw... I read it as soon as I can, again !

Congrats !

E! GAH I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG TO READ THIS!

actually, I read it a soon as you told me you updated but it took me til' now to review... but let me just say, I was so excited to read that I was shaking the entire first read-through and had to read it again because during the first read, I was too high-strung to fully enjoy it. I love it, and considering how little time you got to work on it, I'm glad it turned out like this. seriously, people don't really address the issue of Zelos pushing Sheena away towards Lloyd enough...I'm glad how things worked out in the end... their relationship remains somewhat strained, but on a much more hopeful note.

It's so nice to read something so extraordinarily outstanding, and I want to thank you for that. :) I love your style, you have such talent and a good turn of phrase. You are definitely one of my favorites when it comes to characterizing Zelos, too. I can't wait until you update this again. Love you, FP! XD

Oh, wow, that was even more amazing than I had hoped. Each chapter just keeps getting better and better.I really loved this one because I could feel everything in it. As usual, everyone was in character, and it transitioned very smoothly. Awesomeness. Thank you for posting it because it's always really nice to read your stories; I know if I read your stories, I don't have to worry about them being OOC'd or really unlike the game or anything. :) -SC

Hark! I am alive. =O

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*crickets*

Ahem.

Beautiful... Brilliant... Genius... Absolutely stunning. =O

What more can I possibly say, Faux? You just take Sheelos, and crank it up to the next level. And then some.

This was such an awesome update, and a thrill to read. I couldn't get enough.