 Bellatrix Kale 2009-11-14 . chapter 13Just lalia's pov! :)
And what exactly is the pairing? Cuz I'm getting Merry/OC vibes...
Great fic so far!! |
 Hao'sAnjul 2009-11-14 . chapter 13i was hoping you'd continue in laila's pov in this chapter instead of switching... i wanted to know what happens to her! |
 kittyluver-777 2009-11-10 . chapter 13Interesting chapter. I'm still wondering what's gonna happen to Laila... I think you should do both of their POV's, but you're the author, you've got the power. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
livelaughlove,
kitty ^.^ |
 len 2009-11-06 . chapter 13 yey! another chapter..=) more please..=) |
 Bhel-Elryss 2009-10-28 . chapter 13a little bit of everything! squee, this chappy was so cool, and i love the way you mingle the qoutes in with the dialogue, it really rocks! |
 Aiko of the Akatsuki 2009-10-28 . chapter 13OMG! Awesome update! ^^
I was ecstatic for this chapter--and with good reason too! But I am seriously so worried about Laila right now; what's Saruman gonna do with her?! >> He better not try anything, otherwise I'll be super angryful! >:o
But still, this chapter was wonderful and filled with such vividness that I had visions of the movie replaying in my head as I watched it! ^.^ THAT is the mark of a truly gifted and talented author! =^_^=
Update soon! <3 |
 UchihaAkia 2009-10-28 . chapter 13Using Laila's Pov would make the story too short depending on how you do it. So i suggest you do a bit of both but remain mostely on Laila's point of view. Great chapter and looking forward to what will happen now that Laila's back at the Isengard. |
 SongsOfSpring 2009-10-27 . chapter 13Hi! Thanks so much for adding more! I love how you added the original plot (and wonderfully eloquent quotes) into your own plot. it brought the whole world together for me. can't wait to find out about Laila, now that she is captive! also, don't forget to work on your other story. if you haven't, you should read the three one-shots i have on my account. they're all twilight, but i may do other things as well. my favorite is the one about paul; please read it and tell me what you think! happy writing! |
 Miss Danax 2009-10-27 . chapter 13I honestly don't mind. This is fantastic. I hope to read more soon. (: x |
 BleedmetoINSANITY 2009-10-27 . chapter 13Uh... I'm thinking maybe part Laila or part Aragolarn... *can't decide between Aragorn and Legolas* >_< Lols. BUT YAY YOU UPDATED!! THIS IS A HAPPY DAY!! Lols... Yeah... xDDOh, I was just reading the A/N you have at the top and thought it read 'My heart swells with Kitty pride' lols xDD Had me wondering for a minute there xDD ^_^ |
 Liliesshadow 2009-10-27 . chapter 13Aw! never hear her voice again?
thats just to cute! a little corny but cute! @w@ |
 microcheese 2009-10-27 . chapter 13luv it!
keep it up and update pronto!
-Luna Carter |
 Myrle 16 2009-10-23 . chapter 12wow!
that was an awsome chapter. i was wondering what u were going to do to Laila... i like it and cant wait to see what u do next!! |
 SongsOfSpring 2009-10-21 . chapter 12Oh oo!! So sad!! I want to know what happens next. By the way, this is Kat. I reviewed before, but anonymously. Soo, here's my account. I have published two Twilight one-shots (about Paul and the other about Edward becoming a vampire); hope you like them! Write on! |
 len 2009-10-21 . chapter 12 great story!=) it was such a lucky coincidence that i found this story again..please update soon..=) |