A sequel is demanded! This is actually a really good read. Others are either fully on Combat or romance but this is balanced. Good to have read it.

Great!

They're on a space ship!

Now something intersting can happen!

Yays!

ok, if you have AB type blood, you can only give blood to others with type AB. Type AB can receive from everyone and give to others with AB. Type O can give to anyone and receive from only those with Type O. Think of it this way. Type AB is known as the universal receiver and Type O is known as the universal donor. Biology 101. learn it, live it, love it

I know that you probably aren't planning on making a sequel of this, but you have to. It's too good of a story NOT to make sequel of! Especially since they just took off. I REALLY want to know what happens in outer space!

Oooh! This is getting intense!

excellent story please tell if you are going to write a sequel please i need to know what happened

awesome story one of my new favs. is there a sequel?

cool story

An okay story. It had its weak moments but in general it was pretty good. It was interesting to see a somehow more mellow Vegeta.

Also interesting was Videl becoming a mentionable force (although I didn'd like the thing with the blood, I don't think it was really necessary)

Ok, I admit that at least the Phoenix part was original (I mean it was yours) and it has some base since it is actually mentioned in the DB series (although Roshi says that it died lol)

The rest was a classic DBZ fight so I liked it (I mean I am reading a DBZ fanfic heh).

What I couldn't understand was the statement from Vegeta

"All those killed by Frieza still have tails, even. They can’t go Super Saiyan!" What did you mean? We are talking about the remains not the ones killed ny Frieza and what does having a tail has to do with being able to go SS. I don't remember anything about it. It was just a coincidence that they all achieved SS after they settled down on Earth and had removed their tails for obvious reasons?

O\I think I know where this is going and I don't think I like it. By the way I was trying to figure out if you had something to explain the use of the dragon balls at the beginning but I couldn't find anything. The only thing I can think is that he revived Nappa and Raditz for information for Vegeta but wasn't it unnecessary. I mean he could feel him or track him with the scooter. So why put that scene with dragon balls at all. Was it just to draw the attention of Videl and Gohan and have the fight with the revelations as a consequence?

I have mixed feelings...

I really didn't like the idea of the hyperbolic chamber but on the other hand the way you used it to advance the characters battle wise and also give a little insight to their personalities was very nice.

I really don't think that ordinary people could handle it (humans can handle but after a lot of training) but if we go by the anime then Videl should theoretically handle (power level two hunderd something and when goku was a child and went in was below 200, and don't forget Videl is uber pushy and stubborn :) )

It just felt a little cheap. But like I said the way you used somehow balances it for me.

Touching chapter. There are some powerful feelings there. I can't really say that it's a replay of anything because with 291 episodes DBZ has done everything imaginable as far as adventure and action is concerned, but it's intense and it may even get you... Kudos on a very good chapter

Always liked to see a vulnerable Videl. No I am not a sadist, it's just you know, I like to see her feminine side.

So far it's kinda good. Didn't really get into any details so I cant really see the point of reviving Nappa... I hope it shoes later

This was great.