Thanks. I like this.

this was really good. i loved it. the parents have to watch the little girl repeat their steps was good.

This is so good! I love how you made it mirror their own lives with their kids. So sweet. You are a fabulous writer, and I read all your Indy stories today, and loved each one of them. I can't believe I hadn't discovered you before today!

Oh, yah. This si perfect.

actually lovely
every point is an idea for tons of fics specially with the daughter issue XD

**thumbs up**
it was really nice ^^
keep it up

I loved that.

Different..Interesting...Had it's sweet moments.

I love these things. Very Very good! I liked the last line especially--it really summed it all up.

Fantastic job!I loved how you named him Jack Ryan!AMazing!Maybe you could do a sequal

I love this story! I've been hoping that someone would write a "what if?" story like this, and yours is the first that I've seen. And what a first it is! My only commplaint is that I want more, lol. Very sweet though, nice job.

Oh, my heart! These are wonderful,especially #17 and #29.
Thanks you so much for posting more!