 Tomo Irizuki 2009-06-19 . chapter 1it is so hard to get my mind wrapped around that last scene of kakashi in bed...naked, and u know...anyway it was a funny story |
 Whisperdale 2009-02-13 . chapter 1*is laughing so hard she's sure her voicebox will fly from her open trap*
Oh man, this is just PRICELESS! xD
Holy ** dude. You do realise you have now given me the weirdest mental images I have ever had burned into my brain in the entirety of my life? xDD
"I'm here to have lots of hot and kinky sex with you."
^ I pretty much exploded into perverted laughter at that. My little sister came flying in, I was nearly laughing too hard to close the window and spare her eyes. xD
I love how Kakashi's going about getting her things and driving her nuts at the same time. Lol at the flower shop scene. Everything flows together really nicely, I love how well-written you managed to make this. On a scale 1-10? -10-! |
 Sealson 2009-02-03 . chapter 1Hmm...funny... |
 1 2009-01-07 . chapter 1 Oh, whoa. Nice one. |
 blacksheep21 2009-01-04 . chapter 1haha i love your writing. it's very humorous. :) the way you transitioned to different perspectives is great (another part of which makes the story comical). I'm looking forward to more of your stories... |
 Clearheart 2009-01-04 . chapter 1Lol. That was a fun read! I like the flow of the story and how it shifts between perspectives of different characters. Also, it's fun because the readers know that Kakashi is the secret admirer all this time. By the way, the descriptions made me lol more than a few times.
Fantastic job. ^^ |