Hey! What's with the cut there? I want to see what happens next, and I don't mean with Sarah or James dinner dates.

LOL

Very well done story.

Evil, evil, evil. I LOVE it!

AHHHHHH! YOU. ARE. EVIL.

i humbly bow before you.

that made me laugh..hehe.."and- 'And cut!'" love the way you write your stories )

HEH! I like it! Nice twist at the end. Now *this* I would submit to that editor - I think he'd really get a kick out of it, especially if the "Cut!" and everything after it was on another page so the reader couldn't glance down and get a preview.

Also there is an 'e' on the end of "Shakespeare."

lol... Very nice. I do believe it's *Freddie* but whatever.

Oh. My. God. I really loved this!. You have to write more ike this!. How about fanfic about SMG and James Marsters?. From what I read you can do it!

Woohoo. Lovin it here! heehee. You should hook up with Joss and co-write a show. heehee

Ha,Ha oh and did I forget to mention Ha! You actually have a powerful ,albeit short,story with a strong grasp for exploiting a charecters inner struggles couple that with a good sense of humor and you have a writer I'm gonna be keeping my eye on:)

This is so cool. You get us so worked up and in the moment and then... you turn it all around. Write more like this.

How can you stop there? You really are evil. Awesome job though, I think you should continue to write B/S fics

That was interesting, liked it kinda...WEIRDO! jk

Cute. You forgot the part where the UPN executives come in and say "you can't do that on television...well, cut 15 seconds and we'll be happy." Ah, the network of pro wrestling. Keep writing!

Damit! That was cool! I was all like Post smashed mood, *You knw what i mean* then bam! Funnies. Wiered but cool. Nice idea

I dug it a lot. You should keep adding to it. I always wonder what their real lives are like.