Oh Angel... EFC is back... with a vengeance. I love it!

Bloody brilliant my dear.

The “reclusive, obsessive compulsive, vintage clothes wearing and special diet eating, boss”. Yes you are EFC, yes you are.

You always guide me to the good ones to read and you weren’t kidding… I’m hooked like a hillbilly on heroin.

Moving right along huh? I just cannot wait until they meet. I'm curious about Edward too. Is he a vampire? Or something else? It seems very strange to me. Whatever he is, I like his shirts :).

M, I already told you how I felt about all this, but I'll do it here too.

Loving the analward and the long lists. And the desk thing, I already told you, but that's so how it is. I was like that with my first desk. The feeling of self-importance for the very first time. Very realistic.

And thank you for not dwelling on graduation. It could have been really long and boring, but you skimmed it because it just didn't hold enough relevance to the plot.

"For some reason I liked being up here. I had to admit it was a little lonely being in the house without company and being in this dressing room was the closest to human contact while at work."

I liked this feeling of solitude when she's in the house. It gives it an atmosphere. I can almost imagine the only sounds in the house being like, a ticking clock, or a dripping faucet.

I won't dwell on the shirt choices, because... I helped, and I think they all fit very well.

And the Edward shirt thing! GAH! I loved that. Being all repulsed by the smell, then leaning in to smell it again, because really, it smelled god.

I only have one peeve with this chapter...

NEEDS MORE VEGETABLES!

I snicker.

-AG

Great chapter thanks for the funny image of Edward sniffing his shirt like a weirdo lol :P

Colour me intrigued. I can hardly wait to find out where Edward is off to, and where the story is headed!

Yeah I really really really like how this story is shaping up..

How he thinks its her perfume. . .

I can't wait for them to meet.

Or even for him to see her before he knows it is her.

This is brill Angel. I bloody love it & am already addicted!

Emmy.

X

Poor Edward has no idea what he's getting himself into. I love that he picked the one shirt she lingered on. You are building up to their first meeting and I'm dying to read it. Great job as usual.

Oh, Edward Cullen does love a challenge. GR! I love him sniffing his own shirt. It probably looked a lot like a Tide commerical...with a REALLY HOT dude in Kiss t-shirt.

I, like Edward, am jonesing for my next hit.

Wonder Twin power, ACTIVATE in the form of a Hot Pocket...so...well, you know...

haha

It's building nicely.

I like the twist of her scent causing him pain.

I can't wait for the tension when they finally meet!

Edward's got a new addiction. he he. Thanks for the update.

I'm exhausted after Bella's day and I just had to read about it. (or maybe it the fact I can't sleep.) Edward sure ran her all over God's creation. lol

I keep trying to imagine what Edward is going to do when he meets Bella face to face. Well, at least it would appear that her scent makes him ill and he finds it disgusting. What does it all mean? I look forward to finding out.

good chapter xx

Oh I am so along for the ride on this one!

keep up, I like it.

Ah! What's he gonna do?

I love this.

Edward's so mysterious still and it's exciting to read.

That's what got me hooked on Twilight in the first place was Edward's mysterious.

I was kinda speechless reading it and was in awe some the mystery boy aggravating Bella.

I can't wait for more and to figure out more and to see what else will happen!