Fufu! This is so funny! I love it!

aw~ omg i love this~
ok the carnivorous parts were weird but so hibari-ish~
and i still can't get over the part where ken and chikusa freaked out when hibari declared that he wanted to bite her.. lol~
too cute.. very nicely written.. making this a fav~! thanks~ ^_^

Ahh, I keep laughing. Fail, Hibari, fail.
Very well written; I loved how awkward he was XD

LMAO! This is hilarious! Everything Hibari says made me laugh. XD And the venus fly trap thing...yes, that WOULD be the kind of flower he would give, wouldn't it? Haha! Thanks for the great laugh!

Hey x

God, this cracked me up :D Cause we all know if Hibari ever did try to court someone, he wouldn't be capable of doing it in a normal manner.

My favourite part?:
"Do you... eat meat?" - Where the hell did that come from?! XD Was he starting out asking something else but changed his mind halfway, or did he genuinly want to know if she ate MEAT? Either way, that line just had me giggling like I was tipsy or something for the sheer randomness.

I also really liked the bit with the venus flytrap. I think I'd be quite offended if someone said a venus flytrap reminded them of me. If anything, it's Hibari who resembles one :D His reasoning is good, of course, "Because... I want to bite you." If I'd have been in Chikusa and Ken's position, I think I would have kicked Hibari's ass at that point too. I've always thought the whole "I'll bite you to death" thing was a bit kinky.

Anyway, great job! I hadn't really had the best of days (damn you slave driver boss...), but this really cheered me up. So thank you!

- Ariana x

LMAO.

Totally cracked and totally great.

wow, I have to say this might be my favourite Hibari\Chrome story.. its just amazing, and I keep rereading it ;p

I so loved every detail in this, the dialouge, the owl attacks, the venus death trap, Chrome's Indecisiveness and her "soothing" manner, Hibari's awkwardness, Ken and Chikusa.. everything was perfect!

“If I’m ever sleeping…you could wake me up…and I won’t kill you.”

lol, he's so thoughtful! :p

thanx for writing this and please!! consider writing more about this couple!! it would be such a shame if you didn't ;)

now I really have to check out your other stories ^^

Convinced that he should start courting Chrome like a normal human being, Hibari began the awkward process of actually approaching the girl and trying to string together enough words to make a sentence without coming off as threatening. These attempts included, but were not limited to:
“Do you…eat meat?”
“I do…But I prefer just the taste of blood.”
“Because of you, I’ve lost ten Hibird cameras. You owe me dinner.”
“No…I changed my mind. I'm the one who owes you dinner….But you still made me lose ten Hibirds.”
“If I’m ever sleeping…you could wake me up…and I won’t kill you.”
“I meant what I said last time. I promise.”

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Oh dear gawd. Woman, you are a sheer genius! I couldn’t stop laughing throughout the story. I think I managed to spit off my intestines or something. But anyway! I was having a difficult time looking for a good KHR fic, so I’m really happy to stumble upon this. You are an awesome, awesome and even more awesome writer. Although, darn. I was kind of hoping Mukuro was going to appear… Come to think of it, what is Mukuro’s opinion about this? =)

Congratulations on the spot-on portrayal of Chrome (“I have to go…erm…stand over there now”) and of course, for our beloved Hibari who we all know is just as sweet and innocent as his venus flytrap gift for her. Lolz. Poor Chrome… Huh… Actually, poor Hibari. He is so misunderstood. ^_^

You did a fantastic job with this one. I’m going to stalk your other stories now. Thank you for sharing this with us.

though hibari will probably bite me to death for this i just have to say it- CUTE! this was great and seemed just so very perfect, i could see hibari doing this, very funny, very cute, nice job

Aw. >W< That was so cute. Hibari trying to court Chrome was so cute. I hope you write more of them together!

This story is really adorable! You srsly brought out Hibari's aloofness! :)

I love it!! It was way too cute. XD Hibari's ao adorable... and a pervert.

this is really good...after raiding fanfics in reborn i've found something nice to read. Ü

Aw dude, that is to cute

I so appreciate the 1869 fandom. We don't have enough people doing this. Please submit more!
This is one of my personal favorites now!