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Xeelia
2009-11-16 . chapter 16
Wow things are getting complicated all the way 'round!
NessieBlack22
2009-10-21 . chapter 15
loved please add more soon
Xeelia
2009-04-16 . chapter 15
Aw! Now he can't throw Dawn's party! :( Unless Willow does a forgetting spell. I can't wait for more!
Vicious Dice
2009-04-15 . chapter 15
Too short! Besides that lovin' it
damageddawn
2009-04-11 . chapter 14
Damn! u kno how to make people keep coming back don't ya! Hee, realy gr8 work can't wait to read more on this. i wonder what she's seeing? X
Ayla-Marie
2009-03-31 . chapter 13
well first off i think his gift should be thoughtful not naughty something he learned she liked while he was in her head and remembered but no he shouldnt go to the party probly at Buffy's command but with his own reason as well he should be waiting for her in the tree outside her bedroom window

but thats just one writers opinon to another ^.^
Xeelia
2009-03-31 . chapter 13
O!! Exciting chapter!

Spike should give Dawn something of his, something, NOT his duster, that she would know he wouldn't just give anyone.

It would be angsty and interesting if Dawn found out during the party that Spike was boffing Buffy again or thought they were.

It would be great if Angelus popped up at the party! He's always good for some angst and destruction.

hehe I hope you some of the ideas!!

Xee
Hatter Madigan
2009-03-27 . chapter 12
I likey! I'll be waiting for the next update!
greenfire249
2009-03-20 . chapter 10
i love this story update soon
Remindsmeofawestsidestory
2009-03-10 . chapter 10
Argh! Cliffy D:

Good though
=D
Xeelia
2009-03-10 . chapter 10
Evil author!! Evil cliffhanger! LOL Great job! Can't wait to see what naughtiness they get up to!
Kellogmonkey
2009-03-07 . chapter 9
this is good. i like the whole "mind-**" thing. something she would think if spike didn't explain. what are you going to do with the spell. i hope you don't make her forget him completely. can't wait till the next chappie!
dark wings of love
2009-03-05 . chapter 8
I absolutely love it! Please update soon, I can’t wait to read more!
Its hard to fined really good Dawn/Spike fanfic but your story is excellent!
NessieBlack22
2009-03-02 . chapter 8
very good
RemindsmeofaWestSideStory
2009-02-26 . chapter 8
=D
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