| Reviews for Naruto One Half |
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RCPMione 5/12/13 . chapter 11 very nice crossover, please keep writing! |
airnaruto45 5/5/13 . chapter 11That'll do P-chan...That'll do. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 11Enjoyed the Naruto vs Sasuke fight, and the ending is hilarious. Sucks for them now that Kuno is interested. Can't wait to see how that plays out. Other than that, it was nice to see the bits of the Naruto characters during the Ranma and Ryoga fight. Overall, this story is very amusing. It blends the wackyness of Ranma 1/2 with the Naruto world nicely. I definitely want to see more. Still missing Hinata, Neji, and Shino from the Naruto group, so I can't wait until they show up, plus other characters like the Sand Sibs. Same goes for Shampoo, Ukyo, and Mousse. As for your question about filler, while theres not much filler I like, theres a bits. Since this is using the harem antics of Ranma 1/2, you could always include some of the movie girls, since Shion and Amaru both apparently fell for Naruto by the end. A suggestion, from the anime in Shippuden there was the Nadeshiko Village, which seems so similar to the Amazons, you could combine the two into one for this story if you want to. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 10And now Ryoga makes his debut into the story after cameos in the last two. The overall group dynamic going on with gang is amusing. And Naruko has a bit of a devious side, huh? I feel bad for Iruka, though. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 9An amusing chapter to go with the last one. So Tayuya hates Naruto because its his fault she got cursed, huh? The chase was overall amusing, and its nice that the Sakura in this story definitely looks like shes not gonna fangirl over Sasuke. And drunken Kushina is very amusing. Hope theres more of that in the future. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 8Overall a good chapter with lots going on. The Naruto vs Kiba fight is resolved, and Kiba's curse is revealed to us readers(A wolf, huh?) We get a Naruto and Sakura bonding moment. Sasuke makes hes debut, and also has a girl curse. And finally, Tayuya appears in this story and looks to be Naruto's Shampoo. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 7So, Kiba has some 'training from hell" and is pretty strong, huh? Also nice to see more Lee. Can't wait until he graduates so he get up to par with Naruto and Ranma. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 6Quite the Ranma-esque situation this chapter. So Tenten is Naruto's second fiancee and that falcon from the last two chapters? Sounds interesting. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 5The Lee stuff was amusing, and now Tenten makes her appearance in the story. Can't wait to see what is up with her. And I'm wondering what was up with that falcon from before. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 4Huh, so Kiba has a curse too, huh? Wonder what it is. Probably something dog related. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 3So along with Sakura and the girls being friends with Akane, Naruto and Ranma are friends. And I'm unsurprised Minato knows Genma and Soun. And Kuno is as delusional as ever. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 2Another amusing chapter. Nice to see some of the Ranma cast. I like how Akane is friends with Sakura, Naruko, and Ino. And it looks like Ranma himself will be in starting next chapter. Also, I'm amused by the idea of Nabiki attending the academy. I'd like to see where that goes. |
Star Dragon 0 5/2/13 . chapter 1This appears to be quite the amusing story already. |
manga freak 9/22/12 . chapter 10 HOLY SHIT! LMAO this story has been the only fic that has made me laugh this much i'm serious XD PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOON! can kushina get drunk again when does shampoo come into the picture what about minato does anyone else find out about his condition what happens when graduate the academy oh what about zabuza and haku did they visit the springs as well can you make someone into a ferret that'll be so funny and is the akatsuki going to be in it and if so can you say it a requirement to be cursed to join the group LOL XD anyways till next time |
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing 8/8/11 . chapter 10How about having Karin as Naruto's Kodachi? Also will Naruto have a fear similar to Ranma's of cats? |