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Gohanzgirl
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
I loved reading! Wonderful writing!
charming2drew
2009-04-30 . chapter 1
Love it! :D
Port-of-Seas
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Great story. The ending... well, it kinda blew my mind.
Scullspeare
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
Great tale! I've always wanted SN to do an avalanche story (you know, the Rockies being in their backyard, and everything) but I guess it's not in the budget. *sigh*

Fortunately, there are people like you to create what the CW's cost-cutting measure won't. :) A big hug and thanks for that.

Great take on the Winchester family dynamic; each butting heads with the others until the chips are down - then they pull together. *shakes head*

Lovely brother moments and John was so, well, John - when you don't want to shake him, you want to hug him.

Thanks for the great read.

Cheers, Sculls
Nana56
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
Awesome action!

Too small boots for Sammy and three pairs of socks on top of that. The kid must have been in agony. :(

I love John, but sometimes I could just shake him! He missed Sam's boot size and just pulled him out of school with really no thought to it. Blindly going after a hunt. Gr

Well done on all counts.
LaylaBinx
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Aw! Super amazing story!! I loved it; simply wonderful!! ^.^
KKBElVIS
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
Hey...Excellent adventure story...

Outdoors/ nature stuff mixed with lovely h/c! Always tops on my list.

Phenomenal...and now one of my favorites.

Thanks much,
Karen
shelby02
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
I am very behind in my reviews and am trying to catch up. I always look forward to you hurt!Sam stories. This was another great one. I look forward to the next:)
Madebyme
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
Oh wow that was great stuff, a pleasure to read form start to finish. It was full of everything that I love in a fic; hurt Sam, worried Dean and a little action, it was a treat.

It's taken me a while to get around to reading this due to the holidays and posting my very first fanfic but I'm very glad that I did, I loved it, a great one shot.

You write the whole Winchester clan so well and I loved how John apologised at the end, very sweet and a nice touch.

Hope to read more of your work soon. Take care, Madebyme.x
kalina-blue
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
Love it. I really liked the little details like Sam's too small boots and that John apologized in the end. Great story.
ephiny63
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
Hey hon
happy new year first,
next I loved this little oneshot, it had everything, angst, humour, booboos, John and Dean in protect mode and the ending, that last scene was perfect I could so see the boys' faces.
well done hon
take care
hugs Shelly
cindy123
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
An apology? From John Winchester? To Sam no less? Wow, will wonders never cease? Great story, as always.

Cindy.
Dimminished
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
There's nothing better than an angst-y Sam story and you've outdone yourself with this one. It was brilliant!

I also appreciate the true emotions you allowed the boys to portray. No two bothers get along 24/7 and I love when authors allow slight rifts between the two, as long as they eventually bring them back together, which you did, beautifully.

Thanks for posting. :)
Ms Hobgoblin
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Wow! You made my day (grins), what more could a gal ask for (except for the real thing maybe!)
I really enjoyed the way you wrote John, Dean and Sam in this one. The way they interacted with each other was awesome.
My favourite bit is when Dean calls down to Sam and Sam smiles back up at him.
Looking forward to more form you soon!!
Hob x
vonnie836
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Nice one, I liked the way Sam's complaints got shot down by John, just to come back to haunt him later after Sam got injured. And Dean wasn't sympathetic either, I wanted to kick him when he let Sam wear the too small boots. Well both of them felt really bad and I'm can just say, they were lucky that Sammy is so forgiving. Really well written. Hugs, Vonnie
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