 Kimiko 2009-10-19 . chapter 3 That was awsome! Great story. I loved it. they would make a great couple. poor wolf, he missed out. :) Ne, think you can do a Murata and Yuuri one? I find it odd that there are none about them, when they look so good together! Anyway, great story! |
 quertzu 2009-07-14 . chapter 3 hey, thanks for writing this! finally some SaraxYuuri! and here I was beginning to think that I´m the only one who wants to see them together! *hugs* |
 silent-marrionette 2009-06-02 . chapter 1LOLZ! I loved this story! I actually read it quite awhile ago but I didn't have an account back then. Anyway! Awesome job! |
 GoddesOfWrath 2009-03-22 . chapter 3that was too cute and sexy!XD |
 Meany 2009-03-19 . chapter 3Kya1 I so wanted to read Sara/Yuuri smut! Thank you, very cool. I absolutely agree that what should have happened in original! ;) |
 Kerii-tan 2009-03-17 . chapter 3That was so many levels of awesome~ |
 fluffy-rakia 2009-02-25 . chapter 3If you have more than one person and something that both belongs to them then you use s'. If it is only one person then you use 's, unless it already ends in s.
For example:
A scarf. One boy. The boy's scarf.
A baseball. Two (or more) boys. The boys' baseball.
If it ends in s already like mistress then you can choose to just add a ' or 's. (So it would be mistress' or mistress's)
The story was really good. I like how you ended it with the soldiers. |
 Aigle 2009-02-24 . chapter 3I missed this fic so much!!
Ah Sara, so eager! I liked that Yuuri was on the bottom. He's so cute!
This was crazy intense. I loved the detail!
Well, you know how apostrophes are sometimes used to shorten sentences... well, see:
We are - We're
They are - They're
You would - You'd
Here is - Here's
He is - He's
(This is one way (of three) apostraphe usage with the "s" is used)
They also show ownership:
"The boy's car is red."
( ^ Here's (here is) number two)
"The boy's car is red." Here I'm talking about one boy. But if you want to use "Boy" as plural, maybe as in brothers that share ownership of the car:
"The boys' car is red."
You don't put it like this:
"The boys's car is red." |
 Lilith045 2009-02-03 . chapter 2Oh. My. God. you made my day! i love it! sara is such a sexy beast, i can't believe it!
and saraxyuuxwolf is a great idea... as lond as it's really like this and nothing like saraxwolfxyuu *shudder*
whatever, i would love to hear more from you... |
 x-EliteAssassin-x 2009-01-21 . chapter 2SaraYuuRam? Sounds like absoulte win to me *_* loving this so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter~ |
 ariana 2009-01-11 . chapter 2 So hot! And I would love to read the Sara x Yuuri x Wolfram threesome fic! |
 Kataru 2009-01-08 . chapter 2omfg Sara sure know how to make the moments worth their while. And I so agree, I also thought of Cinnamon smell when thinking about Sara. Taste so sweet and royalty. xD And It's good that Yuuri's learning to move on his own, he had to make the human king enjoy the moment too y'know.
the threesome, as long as there's sarayuu into it, please do so... X_X Thanks for another full of smexy chapter! da mn, sara's naturally so smexy on his own... X_X |
 Kataru 2009-01-05 . chapter 1omfg... sara!?! O_O that was... the SaraYuu pr 0on that I've been craving! O_O oh Sara, you smexy b-tch! But he sure knows what he's doing. Been practicing lately? ..to whom? x3 Can't wait for the pr 0n version of the other episodes! Thanks so much for this fic! |
 Sarah Tran 2009-01-05 . chapter 1holy...cow
you're my hero for writing this!
I love it! and first chap is hot!
please continue writing!! |
 Aigle 2009-01-05 . chapter 1Woo! You should go write for those people over in Japan. T
hat's EXACTLY what needed to happen! XD |