 Ima 2009-06-03 . chapter 5I like how this is going so far and I can't wait to see how well it will turn out. |
 beauty0102 2009-05-26 . chapter 16yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so. |
 Jaguarsolaris 2009-05-26 . chapter 16thanks for updating. and thanks ahead for doing the one shot of peter. wonderful story. |
 RogueNya 2009-05-26 . chapter 16Well it would not do to leave out the Dawn Treader but that is up to you, but this was a very good chapter that you have done here. And I am sure whatever you decide to do next will be great. |
 Elliesmeow 2009-05-25 . chapter 16Yay, happy ending! I'm thrilled to see this chapter even though it means we're come to the closing of this tale.
Thanks so much for posting.
-Ellie |
 ElvesWizardsCentaursOhmy 2009-05-25 . chapter 16That was beautiful; I loved this chapter a lot. The way you wrote the whole story, was beautiful. I would like to see this move on to Dawn Treader, but it's your story. Wonderful, beautiful job! =) |
 RogueNya 2009-03-15 . chapter 15Wow, pretty cool story, loved how you did it, so they came back at same age they left. Hope you can do another chapter to cover the wedding. |
 Richlan4Life 2009-03-08 . chapter 15You never cease to amaze me. I loved the interaction between Caspian, Peter, and Edmund with Aslan. I just loved the way Caspian proposed to Lucy and her accepting which we knew she would. I can't wait to see what the wedding and after the wedding would be like. This was an awesome chapter as always and can't wait for more. |
 Kamikage Ryuu 2009-03-08 . chapter 15This is really good.
Are you going to show Susan's POV when she goes back to England? Because that'd be interesting. I mean how would she explain to everyone about her siblings disappearance? Anyways I can't wait for the next update. |
 Nikki Massacure 2009-03-04 . chapter 6This is a pretty good story. Update soon. =] |
 Moodynecklace 2009-03-02 . chapter 15Please update soon! It is very good! |
 Imi 2009-03-02 . chapter 15brava! bravo! nicely done! the proposal was brilliant! |
 ElvesWizardsCentaursOhmy 2009-03-02 . chapter 15That was a really good chapter; update soon =) |
 beauty0102 2009-03-02 . chapter 15yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so. |
 Elliesmeow 2009-03-01 . chapter 15That was beautiful. I'm so glad that Caspian and Lucy have each other. I loved the proposal and her acceptance. It was also really sweet the way her brothers and Aslan gave him their blessing.
I hope that was not the last chapter. Thanks for posting.
-Ellie |