 alinaandalion 2009-07-01 . chapter 13Ah, fluff. It makes me smile like such an idiot. I loved how you tied all of this together and it fit with the song. Great job. |
 alinaandalion 2009-07-01 . chapter 12Your writing is so contemplative and you manage to say a lot without putting a thousand words onto paper. It was wonderful. |
 alinaandalion 2009-07-01 . chapter 11Beautiful. Everything was perfect and lovely and all sorts of adjectives that I can't think of at the moment. This ranks at the top of my list of love scenes that you've written. |
 IamTheWitch 2009-06-24 . chapter 13I've just finished reading this; very pretty. I love how in so few words you can write (almost) the entire story. I specially love the last few chapters - I'm a Fiyeraba fan all the way :). It's clever how you put the titles and chapters together, too; the last paragraph was pretty much perfect. I really like how you managed to get Elphie and Fiyero together, have them have a daughter, and not make it look tacky; you managed excelently :)
Again, as I've mentioned before, I love your simplicty in the writing. Good job with these drabbles.
Hope to see more from you soon!
Happy writing. |
 populardarling 2009-06-22 . chapter 13Aww :3 That was so cute! Love the song and love the story. :-)
Great and happy way of ending it.
~Pops~ |
 the epic storytellers 2009-06-22 . chapter 12I have honestly never understood why drabbles get so few reviews, anyway these are wonderful and I was so happy to find a ALAYM story I hadn't read! |
 populardarling 2009-06-21 . chapter 12Sorry I haven't been able to review these! But I am now, that's what counts!
Lovely chapters. I'm not too sure what else to say! I'm guessing you're going to do a post musical. Since the last one is of her dead. Can't wait to read more!
~Pops~ |
 alinaandalion 2009-06-18 . chapter 10Finally, something happy. This made me smile so much. I can't wait for the next one. |
 alinaandalion 2009-06-18 . chapter 9I don't know what to say. I hate it when Fiyero cries in stories. Something about it makes me really sad for whatever reason. |
 alinaandalion 2009-06-18 . chapter 8I love this so much. Perfect descriptions, everything. |
 alinaandalion 2009-06-18 . chapter 7Wow. That last sentence was amazingly heartbreaking. |
 alinaandalion 2009-06-18 . chapter 6You covered a lot of ground in this one and made it all make sense without giving the impression that you were leaving anything out. Impressive. |
 alinaandalion 2009-05-21 . chapter 4In Love and War won't show up unless you're looking for "M" rated fics.
Anyway, this brought back all those memories of my own awkward talks with my mother. Those might have been some of the more embarrassing moments of my life. But, this made me laugh like crazy. I love how you write Elphaba because she has this perfect balance of humanity and sarcasm. Great job, and I'm looking forward to more. |
 populardarling 2009-05-20 . chapter 4Oh I just found this and love it. Am actually writing something similar to this right now. Just going through Elphie's "cursed" magic. Anyways, I think I loved this one because man do I know how Elphaba feels about milestones...lol Can't wait to read more |
 PhantomPenguin 2009-05-20 . chapter 3It seems I am reviewing this backwards tonight...
This was an excellent drabble; it was short (hence, "drabble"), not sweet, but certainly to the point. It is an excellent look into the origins of Elphaba's beliefs in Animal rights. Fantastic job =D |