Great story. Thanks for sharing.

An interesting back story for Kakashi. I'm not sure if it would have a significant impact on Kakashi in the context of a larger story but it would be interesting.

omg, poor kakashi! and then to have that hope ripped away when his father was labeled a traitor and hated! to have to go through that twice is heartbreaking. the kid never has been a kid. i wanna just take him home and coddle him and give him a childhood that he deserves! (course he might not like it though :p but oh well)

interesting take on his mother. as far as anyone knows, well, no one knows anything actually and form their own opinions, so this is unique. the mothers that i've read were kunoichi for sure but were good, caring mothers that were killed hence giving sakumo another reason to go insane.

anyway, i really like the line "she didn't want to give me hers." it's really striking, no wonder sakumo took him in. love this, i really like your little side stories like this, keep them up! XD

Creepy. I like it, but I'm still creeped out by it.

It's...nice, I guess.

I always wondered what happened to Kakashi's mom.

...Wow. That really was a different twist. Well done. ^.^

wow you're right this is really a completly new way to explain Kakashi's childhood and parentage. (at least I haven't senn it before).
You created a really good way to introduce us in Kakshi's background in this story - because in the begining of course nobody would have imagined what was going to follow when he said that he was thinking about his mother.
it's really enjoyable to read a fanfic about Kakashi's past for once that has a completely different way of explaining him and his character, thanks for a new idea to interpret him and his behaviour^^
it does make me somewhat sad tough, when he expresses this complete fait in his father - with knowing how it will be shattered and turn him in a child that can't be proud of his parentage at all - oh my

so really interesting idea - I hope you will show us some bits and pieces of this hero father of Kakshi before he is broken

me^^

ah and sorry for the mistakes - I'm trying my best ;o)

nice start i like it a lot ^^

You said you thought it was an original idea. I thought, "what an arrogant person." :D

Props to you for being right. I liked it very much, the fan was nice visual.

An interesting theory--I enjoyed reading it!

Mmh, very nice and well developped idea...
I think this past kinda fits to Kakashi, although I think his background was even before that already rather sad.
But I'd certainly like to read some more of this =)

It was really good. I doubt it could be true for the real story, but this is fan fiction and I thought it was a really good idea, and well written to boot.

ooh, wow. That's a really cool Idea. Although, one wonders how he was concieved...
And this would really give grounds for kakashi o be so scewd up over his father's disgrace, what wih the possible fear that the leaf would turn on him like stone did. (Speaking of stone, betcha they were kicking themselves when Kakashi was lost to the leaf and then fought against them in The War in this world.)

I agree with your theory.

You never cease to amaze me, Orodruin.