This story was PERFECT! Is there going to be a third? Is there ALREADY a third? Please let me know and I will happily read!

Damn this was a wonderful story you wrote here.

Great work and hope someday for a sequel.

Wispr

A very powerful a vivid ending scene at the temple. Love the banter you got going between Xena and Gabrielle.

Wispr

I really like how you are doing Gabrielle's reactions towards Hope. The bitterness and disbelief comes across very real. Make her more human in my eyes.

Good work!

Wispr

Wow a very powerful beginning and you did fantastic work with getting across the emotions the characters were feeling.

Wispr

This makes a very good story! Also in agreement with others, that it is wonderful that Hope is redeemed. I loved every word!!

Loved it loved it loved it! Had me cracking up almost the whole way through this chapter! Warrior Tree! haha. I now intend to read all your stories! yay! But seriously, you are a great writer! Keep up the good work! And again, Aphrodite is genius!

Wow. You write conflict very well! I was caught up in it all. Very powerful chapter, and I loved the added bits of bittersweet humor. Thinking of writing more?

Loving this story so far! Tic Tacs! Haha. Aphrodite is such a spaz! Great job with all the characters!

Nevermind, found the sequel on your website!

Woohoo at Hope/Eve!

Please meet the sequel where they meet Eve!

I honestly believe Hope and Eve could have some common ground, maybe even a romance between them?

This was a wonderful story. I really like how you brought Hope back and the way you built her relationship with Gabrielle. Great job.

Basically just like Eve, another psycho kid is thrust on them.

I LOVE this story! Aphrodite's talks with the girls are hilarious! I love the way Hope teases Gabrielle! I agree with what spheeris1 said, it was great that Hope got to be redeemed in this story, it balances it out. Thanks again for yet another great story!!

That was simply great! I always felt that it was a little unfair that Xena got to 'redeem' her daughter but Hope was just 'evil'. Made me incredibly sad for Gabrielle.

This story gives the characters a wonderful happy ending. As Aphrodite says, "that's **'" :D