Whoa. This is so amazing. I love the "Now, Then, Today" format, and just the sense that everything's sort of blurred around the edges, but you can understand it anyway. The story is so realistic it hurts. It's right there in front of your face; you can feel everything happening. And the way her memories are so fragmented and so jumbled...it makes perfect sense, the images that stay.

Absolutely fantastic.

Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

This is so good it hurts. Absolutely stunning.

This was sad scary and in a way beautiful... I love your writing and this could actually have happened. CJ's reaction in TWoQ was mysterious... Great job!

:( nice piece of writing, and incredibly scary, sad and disillusioning. is that a word? well...I like how you did flashbacks, and it seems so. realistic, the illusions, 'feminist ' and it's an explanation for how CJ was in the WoQ.

This is incredible, simply incredible. A Perfect piece of angst. I'm sure that WoQ will cause a huge surge in the number of CJ angst fics written, as there has to be some reason why...