How they get back without getting caught always wonders in my mind! very good story

not bad

Nice dialogue-driven piece. I enjoy this couple, so it made reading it very easy, of course. The characterizations seem pretty spot-on.

There were a couple of spots where the tenses seemed a little bit off, but overall this was very solid.

Good job!

Hmm. While I'm not quite a supporter of the Yosuke/Chie pairing(More of a Yosuke/Rise supporter myself), I can see why people support it, due to the gobs of Slap Slap Kiss potential. And you're far from the first to ship. Just one of the first to write it.

That aside, I feel that this was a decently written short fic. The english was awkward enough at points that I'd have advised getting a beta reader to look it over. That aside, it feels like something that could genuinely happen within the span of the game, with the characters there.

Good job, and keep up the work. Even if I don't support the ship myself, I hope to see more P4 (particularly straight paired P4) fics in the future.

You're not the only one, I LOVE chie x yosuke.
They need more love. Anyways cute fic, I hope to see more of this pairing from you.

Really cute story! ^^
I really loved reading it. I even bookmarked it on my PSP so I can read it anytime I want to. Really lovely!

Actually, lots of people ship Yosuke/Chie. Heck, I'm one of them! (OTP) So you're not alone! :D

Good job on this one! (also loved your other P4 fic. Really funny!)

Hope you write more fics on this pairing! ^^

YosukexChie is Old Couple Love.

And Rise is always fun. Watch out, Souji! She might miss your ears next time.

Finally the first Chie/Yosuke fic I've seen on this site. I was also finding the bit about Rise biting Soji's ear amusing since I happen to ship Rise/Soji. Cheers and hope to hear more from you.

lol actually I kinda like these two together too. It was a cute little one shot. Hope you write more ^^

Smiles,
Neo

...Actually, I'm fairly sure EVERYONE ships this.

Not that that's a bad thing, they make a good couple.

Despite my Soji-centric preference, I still enjoyed this.

Yosuke+Chie eh? Not bad, I'm starting to fancy this pairing. Good piece.