I expected more but I respect the last chapter. Congrats- you did another good fic. ^^

Good luck to your present and future fics. Jiayou!

Omo, yay for unpredictability!

You're so creative. You created an original monster well. Awesome. And when I thought that was fun enough to read, twist appears. WONDERFUL!

*faves*

Sorry for reviewing just now. I reread Chapters 1-11 and read 12.

First of all, to be honest, the plot isn't exciting but since you're writing this, why not?

Very readable. Some scenes felt colorless to me but they're still readable. Contains a lot of cute scenes like the scrabble scenes and this chapter's ending.

(Liking it more)

Totally agree with Elena, this is just great!! Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for making my day!

Hey! Thanks loads for reviewing my first MA fanfic! I'm a HUGE fan of your work! Love this fanfic especially the way your chapter titles are used as sentences in the chapters too, neat!

I feel really happy reading the latest chapter of this fic, FINALLY a fluffy happy moment! The MA section here at is lacking in fluffy moments (that's just my opinion XP)

Great fics in general!

Eagerly waiting for the next great fic!
Stef

Wonderful start to a story, no grammar problems and yes, disclaimers are so annoying. Can't wait for more...
But you could have defined the title a little more. And making it a little longer.
Jareth