Okay this is getting better and better as I read on. There is so much going on. One minute things seems to be normal then *BAM!* something evil that way comes. What can I say except exquisite! Thanks and keep those chaps coming.

That was a nice chapter, very sweet.

Valentina fontaine

Hey. :]
I love your story, the plot is very interesting and original. It's hard to find a unique Hellboy II story. Everything tends to be the same. I'm trying to get my muses together and put my hellboy story up. *sigh* Oh well I'll figure it out.

Great story! I read the 1st 1/3 rd in 1 sitting and im a slow reader.BUT...

Theres some things that u need to look into

Firstly, and most importantly, the Prince cannot be only 250 years old. For the story to make sense he has to be somewhere around 1500 to 20. I know thats a huge number but if hes only 250 then the truce with the humans had to be made less than 200 years ago. Thers no way the humans could forget about the truce and the elves in only 200 years, its quite absurd. And the film quite clearly depicts the humans fighting with spears and shields. People didnt use spears in the 19th century. If Nuada's age was over 1500 then the truce would have had to be made in the Dark Age and would consequently give the humans enough time to forget about it.

Secondly, Nuada is too nice. He should have been colder. And I thought the parts about him being ill were too long and dragged. I liked the way you developed his relationship with the other characters though.

Thats all. Dont mind the really long comment and keep up the good work.

I really like this! It's awesome!

Hey this is one great story and wish for you to continue, please? Sorry I did not post any reviews sooner, but once a good story has a hold of me, I can't seem to put it away. Then the end of 57 was right there and I said, *What! No more!* And I started bawling!! ...Just kidding. But this is one of those *Can't put it down because it is so good* kind of story. I look forward to the next chapter. Well done.

This is great! Update soon.

And Abe needs to have time. He’s too sleepy to do that mostly.”

Ok this one made my day :)

And yeah family's pressure on children can be in fact annoying...

Hey...


It's been a while... but..

I really like this chapter... especially this light sketch of Nuada's past. I believe our visions of his past have much in common *winks*

And I love What have you done song and yasmine tea ;)

wow, you're a wonderful writer! I love your sensory details, and the story was absolutely magnificent^.^keep writing!

Hugs and Kisses

I loved this chapter, especially the Nuada/Liz bonding time! I must say that I love your style of writing, and I am highly anticapating reading the next chapter! ^_^

Aw poor Nuada's getting sick. That sux, but the story's great. I can't wait for more.

my new slogan:
Animals Have Dreams Too!

loved the update dear and am so sorry that i've not replied yet but i seriously have NO time at the moment.

cant find the link to your deviant?? email it again please?

From Hepburn

It is me!
I am ever so sorry that I have taken an age to get back to you about your story!
I hope that this message finds you well?
Well I have to tell you that I really liked your story and I want to thank-you for asking me to read it!
I love HellBoy and his gang and the characters of Prince Nuada and Princess Nuala his sister. They are great!

update soon,please awsome chapter!