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JadedRosalie
2009-12-06 . chapter 19
love it
xXxBOOxXx
2009-11-30 . chapter 19
I love Evan and Eve they are just adorable together!
Cena-Wilson-Crazy
2009-11-29 . chapter 19
Interesting pairing there. I never thought of Eve and Evan, but I like the sound of it. I'm really curious to see what's going to happen next.
Secondly, and I NEVER thought I would say this, but I am still really ** with Maria and Jeff (who happen to be my favorite Superstars and couple). I really hope they open their eyes.
Great chapter ! Update soon
TJ Sparkles
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
What a lovely chapter =)

I really like the chapters from Eve's perspective, 'cause she's really changed and become this girl that I think I'd like & get along with. She really wasn't all that bitchy to begin with, but it's nice to see her breaking the stereotypes & proving that just because she's popular, doesn't mean she's bitchy.

I felt bad for her. All she was trying to do was look out for a friend & everyone's spreading lies about her for it. I hated that part of high school. Well. She should keep her head up knowing that it's not true, right? And she seems to have maybe found a friend in Evan (who, btw, is SO ADORABLE! I seriously love him!).

“It’s an expression of love, as far as I’m concerned. And I guess I just loved you so much that I wanted you to feel how I feel too.”

OH. NO. HE. DIDN'T. Oh, he makes me so mad. Sex IS a big deal, and he's lying about the way he feels about it & making it seem like he thinks it's a big deal when he really doesn't! It's all because of that stupid bet! And poor Maria, she's really naive.

I really, really, really hope he falls on his ** sometime soon & Maria sees him for what he truly is--scum.

Great chap, Mikki!
xTwistedxImperfectionx
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
Mikki, I'm sorry for reviewing late. I thought my computer had a bug in it, but apparently not. It was just the mouse, so yay, I can review now. LOL.

Aww poor, poor Jeffro. He tried to saying sorry. But you can't really blame Eve for being mad at him. I would be too even though Jeff is so damn cute. Sorry getting sidetracked there.

Gah, as much as I really hate to admit this: Candice was being quite the **... There I said it. How can she act like she cares about Maria when she's screwing her boyfriend? Real good friend there. LOL.

And Eve and Evan? Although I love them, I know that you're not a fan. But maybe this will change your mind some about them. But I'm curious if Eve and Evan's friendship is going to turn into something more or if they will simply remain friends.

And Maria can't be ready to do that with Dolph. Why? And since when has she thought about that? She must be trying to substitute that in or something since she's alone?

And no Jeff and Maria scenes in this chapter makes me sad. LOL. I'm just playing. I'm sure you have something up that sleeve of yours.

Okay, I think I've covered the basics. I seriously cannot wait for the next update. Which I'm pretty positive will be amazing. You know with all of the reviews you get for this particular story makes me seriously wonder if people only read stories with the pairing of Jeff and Maria. Now don't get me wrong I love those two together, but it's good to read other things too. LOL. Well keep up the awesome work Mikki. You're doing rather well on your fics and people need to appreciate that.

~Alisha~
DanaO1230
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
the tables really have turned... i must say i am realy fustrated with maria, and i think that jeff need to find his sack! and beat the demon outta dolf and steal maria from him! amen!
wwegurl815
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
"High-flying ninja dude"- Hehe.. It made me laugh. It's a good nickname for him, though. Fits.

I'm really enjoying this story. I'm surprised to find that I actually like the idea of Jeff and Maria together. I never really thought they'd work so well but they do as proven by your amazing story. I love how you portray everyone in here. Matt especially. Some of he things he says... It's great. Lol. And while I love Evan, Eve should end up with Matt. They'd be good together.
Melissa Cristina
2009-11-27 . chapter 19
Ugh as much as I love Maria she's defintely starting to bug me! Can't she see that Dolph is a jerk who's only after one thing?! And Eve, it sucks that she's been put in this situation but there's a silver lining to it...Evan Bourne! Firday night is going to be eventful I'm sure. Thank-you for the update, I'll patiently wait for the next chapter.
xSomeKindaRush
2009-11-26 . chapter 19
Maria is TOTALLY not ready, I know it.
Poor Jeff & Eve. Going through tough times.
BUT EVE MET EVAN. <3
I love those two. :)
GREAT CHAPTER, I love getting a perspective from Eve.
TithaHardyGirl
2009-11-24 . chapter 18
Poor Eve. What´s wrong with Maria? I can´t belived that she belived in him.
Please update soon.
rory21
2009-11-18 . chapter 18
No I can't believe Maria believed Dolph (or anyway decided to defend him) over Eve! That's so, so, so, so utterly wrong! *pouts* Poor Evie. And oh Jeffy not backing her up adds to the major suckage... a huge boo to that.

“What happened to ladies first?!” shouted a voice that was very familiar to her.

“Well when you see one, let me know!” A deeper male voice struck back.

“Oh, you little—”

Hahaha oh, these two. XD I belong to the group that wants them to hook up btw lol.

Great chappie pirate, can't wait to see what happens next with all this going on!
TJ Sparkles
2009-11-12 . chapter 18
Eve did the right thing. She might not feel that way now, & she might be upset that Maria was hurt by it, but I'm glad she told her. I definitely wouldn't want to be in that situation--it's been my personal experience that when you do tell your friend, they either think you're jealous or just being mean. I can't believe Jeff didn't back Eve up--camping trip or not, he knew that this was something Maria had to hear about sooner or later.

Maria's a sweet girl, but she really is very naive. It would have hurt her more in the end had she found out on her own, without Eve telling her. Hopefully she comes to her senses soon.

Loved the chappy =)
xCutexKissesx
2009-11-12 . chapter 18
OMG that was amazing mikki (:
Melissa Cristina
2009-11-05 . chapter 18
Ah, poor Eve! Bad Jeff for leaving her alone like that and ugh Maria not wanting to believe anything! Maybe Maria will believe Eve if she catches Dolph in the act? Or maybe Jeff needs to man up and tell Maria the truth too...but then how will that affect their friendship? So many questions! Thank-you for the update, keep up the good work.
xXxBOOxXx
2009-11-04 . chapter 18
poor eve :( Update soon
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