 BAColeNC 2009-12-02 . chapter 12Sorry so late with this.
A very nicely done fight scene, and I enjoyed the scene with Robin and Raven. I'm looking forward to seeing how she's going to regain her powers. Or should I ask if? |
 TAUT13 2009-11-29 . chapter 12So, I've been so busy wit other things that i let my inbox get full of stories to read. I've finally finished and I must say, i was glad to save this for the end. I really liked this story and can't wait till ypu update! |
 Little Miss Juliet 2009-11-26 . chapter 12Why hasn't BB made his move? What's going to happen to Blood? Will Raven get her powers back? And what about (pause) the ducks?!?!
(...sorry. Saw something similar on this National Geographic thing once...it was pretty funny)
Cough.
Anywho, again, very nice. It must suck to have awesome powers that are controled by a jewel that was swallowed by this creepo and was regurjitated because of your boyfriend-gone-tape worm and it still doesn't work...heh |
 Attemptedflight 2009-11-26 . chapter 12If you end this soon, I'll cry. :( This was a great chapter! Keep up the good work! |
 titanfan45 2009-11-25 . chapter 12I don't see anything to criticise. I think you did a good job with the fight scene. This was the first story I've ever read that had Beastboy become a tapeworm, good job on that by the way. |
 Wolvmbm 2009-11-25 . chapter 12That was brave of Beast boy and what he did for Raven. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great story as I can't wait to see what happens next. :D
I mean what do these messages in Raven's mind mean anyway ? :( |
 FanficLoverGirls 2009-11-25 . chapter 12 To lazy to login. o.O
Anywho... Yay! BB to the rescue! The worm... Blood's throat... chakra... thing was... sorta disgusting xD
And I love the RobRae friendship fluff. My fave part, other than the BBRae. :D
Awesome job. AGAIN. xD Update soon!
-Rianna- |
 Shizuku Tsukishima749 2009-11-25 . chapter 12That's so cool! I LOVED this!
Gosh, this was awesome! I loved the parts where Rae realized how much her family cared for her, both when they fought for her and nursed her back to health. ^U^ LOVE those moments!
Goodness, the chakra thing was disgusting...but effective! XD At least they have enough evidence to jail his ever-living butt! lol.
Rock on! ^U^ This was a very touching, very cute chapter!! Poor Rae, still powerless and so confused... ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) |
 FanficLoverGirl 2009-11-23 . chapter 11DX DX DX Oh God. I missed it again! TWO CHAPTERS!! DX Deepest apologies, friend!!
*clicks on sub button*
There.
Story is great! Getting better by the second! It was amazing how Raven could think of great ideas - she IS smart - which means you're the smart one. :D XD lol seriously... On such situations I can never think of a plan to escape... Too much fear and panic. XD
Again, a GREAT job! And a LATE me. DX sorry bout that.
Oh, did you get my message about Teen Titans Fanbase? ;) |
 Shizuku Tsukishima749 2009-11-07 . chapter 11Wow! Brilliant chapter! *U*
My goodness, poor Rae! Stupid powers... XC *shudder* Man, Blood is one CREEPY villain!
Yay! The ending was awesome! *U* I'm so glad they came for her at the last second, and that it was BB who called her! ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) |
 Little Miss Juliet 2009-11-06 . chapter 11Blood...checking out...Raven...NYA! I have NO idea how you wrote it because I had the hardest time actually reading it...It was...disturbing. In a good way though! (Wait...Lemme rephrase that: it was well written, but it was disturbing)
I liked the action. I can't write action very well, but I can imagine Raven doing all the...stuff you had her do. The Trigon stone nose/eyes thing was pretty funny though ^^ |
 titanfan45 2009-11-05 . chapter 11Looks like she is finally going to get some assistance. |
 lar lindor 2009-11-05 . chapter 11Bravo! No, it didn't drag. The action was crisp, and the dialog was adequate. Specifically, give Blood better lines. He's crazy, but not stupid.
Thanks for asking about my stories. I really don't like to borrow the family laptop. My pc needs help. Anyway, I do have ideas for another TT fanfic. It'll be the sequel to "Green Monster."
Lar |
 Moving Mountains 2009-11-05 . chapter 11Love it!! Please update soon =D |
 Attemptedflight 2009-11-05 . chapter 11Man, I really love the chapter. You really gave this chapter a decent name. The chapter sends chills down my spine. |